why did you refer to jack as gwens former lover, i've seen seasn 1 of torchwood and quite a few episodes of season two but nothing ever from the ones i'd seen anyway implyed they'd been 'lovers' or did you mean she was looking owen it's because it said jack was coming down the stairs towards them and then she 'glares at her former lover' andc onsidering jack was the one wh spoke just before that it relly makes it sound like that's hat you were implying anyway ignore thin i get it must have ebeen own now but at first it just so seemed that it was him she was glaring as he was the one who had spoken, owen hadn't said anything so why would she be glaring at him, you get the picture. anyway apart from that this was brilliantly written, really well writen,, detaled etc it was good :)

Love it!

Way to go Ianto! Almost feel sorry for Owen...almost. Keep writing!

Ha. funny. Me likes.

hi excellent piece, was a bit worried there for a moment! keep writing

Hehe. *Shakes head.* Bless em. I love that Torchwood lot. Mind if I archive this?

keep writting!

Emma

Nice, I could see this happening. Well done.

That is quite funny, okay very funny,

I liked JAck and Ianto just walking away... SLOWLY!

Where was Tosh?

SG