Reviews for Sin of Omission

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yas-m 2007-06-28 ch 1,	abuseof all your other smut-filled fics, I decided to read this one. and now, please tell me, how can I explain to my coworker exactly why I am crying?? YOU KILLED JACK! seriously, so beautifully written, but DAMN! -your sister in arms ;)
LostInDreaming 2007-06-19 ch 1,	abuseHey! The only reason I do not add this one to favorites is because I absolutely can't stand Jack's death. No matter what the idea and purposes were. The LOST universe spins around him from my POV =) Do not blame you for that, but can not forgive either =) hahahaha. Don't take it seriously. I'm a fan of happy-endings. Or at least there should be no death. Not HIS death =) You're the best!
Aero 2007-06-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseOh my, Tahti your story totally got me! I always have a thing for heart-broken Jate and considering the complex and delicate relationship between them, I think there should be a huge event to trigger their making all the feelings clear to each other. The way you represent the story is so beautiful and touching. Crying Jate is just, um...what I LOVE
light-stick 2007-06-03 ch 1,	abuseI'm crying. And laughing. And no I'm not laughing about the story, I'm watching Friends. So I'm Laughing and crying and my mother thinks there's something really wrong with me. Wonderful oneshot! Ida:-)
Ladywilde 2007-04-29 ch 1,	abuseOMG! That was too freakin' good - it was so beautifully written and the angst, dear god...so wonderful, really it brought tears to my eyes as I read this. I could picture it all so clearly, poor Kate! The pain she was going through in this scene was conveyed so beautifully...the regret she must have felt, all of it! Just perfect...I loved this! Awesome!
guava22 2007-04-08 ch 1,	abusethat was one of the most beautiful and saddest storys i have ever read.. wow i feel like crying. Keep up the AMAZING work!
Heavenly Moments 2007-03-17 ch 1,	abuseTahti, Basically...you're a fucking genius. (Excuse my language) You're such a brilliant writer. You never fail to amaze me. Keep writing...and How are you? I haven't heard from you much. I can't believe you killed Jack!! I never thought you would. I thought you loved him too much. :) I loved it. I love angst..especially when Jack is involved.
Wanda 2007-03-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. You really made her suffer! Y
SonicH2O 2007-03-06 ch 1,	abuseGeez...that was incredibly sad...so incredibly sad. You nailed it. Great job!
still_fate 2007-02-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseMade me cry. a LOT.
M.Tiamat 2007-01-21 ch 1,	abuseOh my God.. bawls That was so sad and beautiful. :( The emotion just about killed me. bawls even more Poor Jack. :'( GLASS IS EVIL, I TELL YA! You have a way with words
jojogirl 2007-01-19 ch 1,	abuseAw this was amazing and I'm crying now. How could you kill my baby Jack? cradles his lifeless body to her bosom. No seriously, it was great and so angsty and disturbing. There is a certain quality to the tone of your voice, a certain imagery in your writing. I think it comes from the fact that, not being a native speaker you use different metaphors or similes as others might and that makes the writing just that much more colorful and intriguing. It touched me deeply. The only part I wasn't so sure about is if Kate would swear that much but she was in distress, right? Maybe then she would. But she just doesn't seem like the swearing type to me. Sawyer and Jack on the other hand, those two I can see swear hehhehee. But that's just me. Anything else was great and epic and moving and so gloriously tragic. sobs
LiniHazelnut 2007-01-16 ch 1,	abuseoh my god, how could you do that? I'm crying so hard right now...can't stop...oh my god, that was so sad! cries harder I totally didn't expect this! You know I love your stories, this one just broke my heart...sniff
momx2 2007-01-15 ch 1,	abuseWOW. I am literally speechless. I totally 10% understand what you meant when you said that you wanted Kate to suffer. I was totally disgusted with her sleeping with Sawyer. I actually like Sawyer, but with Kate it is just BLEH!! Jack's face when he saw those two together was heartbreaking! Your story was the most angsty fanfic I have ever read! It was well written and I felt the emotion like it was really happening and I was there!! Well done! P.s. I REALLY enjoy your smut fic's also!!;)
windysky 2007-01-14 ch 1,	abuseblah. i'm crying now. that was the saddest fanfic i've read in a long time and i'm not even sure what to say now. i'm totally depressed but your writing was awesome and its good to cry every once in a while. now i will have to read again. maybe i'll be able to handle it better the second time.

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