 Theed 6/13/00 . chapter 1Yes, it was very dark, but, I love Episode III stories like that. It will be my favorite Star Wars film because of it. Pain is not always a bad thing. I loved everything about this story. I liked the way you put Obi-Wan's feelings in there about Ami, and I also loved the ending paragraphs. It was beautifully written, and I hope that there are many, many more to come! |