Oh, I love it. I hope you're going to keep this story updated becuase I want to kow what happens next!

I loved your dealing with Gruffi and Gusto. Thye're awesome whn they put up pne of their "discussions". You picture them all so well, capturing their personalities and actings so well.

Poor Gusto fell in the river and got cold. But even worse, got caught up in bed. Good idea to have Zummi using that trapping spell on him. I remember that one from the series. It's definetly like him to try to get out of bed like that. I actualy know how he feels. I would also have bored myself to death if I hadn't had my scetchbook with me if I was stuck in bed.

Another thing I loved was how Grammi dealed with him, like a mother to a big baby. The scene where he was gonna take his medicine was priceless! Grammi's right; he takes the cake.

So please keep this up? I really loved it, I loved it I loved it!

Awesome! No wonder, its like maybe the second most awesome gummi bear story i have ever read. I like it when people start off when its winter then and say the frost is nipping the nose, but yours is still fine.

Reply to Gypsy.

I don't think there is any stealing happening by the writer mentioned. A true Gummi-Bears fan would know how Gruffi would react and how the Gummi-bears would talk. I believe the writer mentioned is a true fan. The story is much different besides.

I'm really enjoying this story and I very much hope you will come back and continue/complete it someday! :) But I also think you should know that there's a story on this site called Return of the Great Gummis Part One by Jeffrey Snyder that seems to contain an awful lot of dialogue that is identical or near identical to yours. I read them one after another and I noticed the similarities straight away. I think someone's been plagiarising you and I can't abide that so this is a heads up! You deserve better than to have your work stolen!

WOW! I am surprised at how good this story turned out to be! This is a great story and is very well-written too! But when are you going to update it! I'm DYING to find out what happens next! There are hardly any good Gummi Bears fanfics on the Web at all! Yours is one of the few I found that is actually interesting! Are you going to continue writing the story? I hope so b/c I LOVE IT and I can't wait for the next chapter! PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! You've got at least one avid reader out there who's waiting! :)

I really like this story. It reminds me a lot of the show. please continue.

wonderful story, especially how you managed to keep everyone nicely in character

..is it just me or do I see a glimpse of Lady Bane/Igthorn now and then, that may turn out into something bigger ;) (sorry, but Im totally into this pairing since I first watched the show, so I guess its only natural for me to think like that XD)

keep going the good work and I hope you continue soon !

That took me right back to my childhood! You captured them so well! And Gusto, bless him - I can just see him being a nightmare patient...;)

Looking forward to more. :)

I think this story is great. There aren't many new gummi bears fanfics out there, so I'm happy to see one this well written.