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Ducky'sgirl4ever
2009-02-26 . chapter 1
A great story. Very good.
LazyChestnut
2008-03-24 . chapter 1
Ok, well, first of all, I love this oneshot. Seriously.

Second, I'm starting a C2 dedicated to the very few Liesl/Rolfe fics we have here, and I was wondering if you have any objections to my adding this? If you do, please tell me, and if not, thanks!

~LazyChestnut~
PirateQueen716
2008-01-10 . chapter 1
This was so sweet. I really like the rewrite of the song, Liesl growing up and having expierenced the things she only ever sung about. I truly believe she would have still be in love with Rolfe. I thought it was beautiful.

I do not remember any last name for Rolfe. Sorry about that!

Great Work :)
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx
2007-12-30 . chapter 1
liesl always needed to grow up. she longed to be treated like a woman and what all happen with rolfe was just what she needed. excellent story!
books4evah
2007-10-26 . chapter 1
Hmm... Interesting. But just so you know, the Sound of Music was based off a real family, and they went to America. You might already know, but, just wanted to point that out,because you have them in Switzerland.
rikkurox
2007-07-22 . chapter 1
Great story, go get em girl! It's great to see her grow up n I always liked Lisel's character, well done!
TheOriginalAlice
2007-06-04 . chapter 1
I want to congratulate you since you have made a very good revision of 'Sixteen going on Seventeen'. As I was reading the lyrics, tears began to form in my eyes and as I read further, I began to cry. Amazing. Keep it up. Hope you write more!
Maria-Lilly Kon
2007-05-17 . chapter 1
rolfe's last name is Gruber. (well, that's what it says on my DVD anyway.) and i really liked it, it's on my favs!
Allyne Twixt 99
2007-04-06 . chapter 1
I loved the song - I sang along with it.
Rolfe actually does have a last name in the film: Gruber. It says it in the DVD case - and so I have my proof.
True, Liesl would have grown up during the war. I think, after watching the film, that Liesl was ready to grow up, but just needed a push. She thought she was, when she was with Rolfe, but when he betrayed her, she felt like a child. This would have been a big step.
The ending was a tad sad, but it is unlikely that he would've survived. The second world war was brutal on all sides.
-Agent 101
colorfulsimplicity
2007-04-01 . chapter 1
I loved this...very nicely done :)
ZD87
2007-02-10 . chapter 1
pretty awesome fic.
=^_^=
JustWriter2
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
I don't think he had a last name... Well, maybe he did in the book, but the statistics of people in our generation who've read it is most likely much less than the ones who've seen the movie. Oh, btw, the VonTraps did move to the U.S. in real life. They must've gone through hell in the Depression.

-JW`chan ^-^
foreverliesl28
2007-01-16 . chapter 1
hm quite good for your first tsom fic!! i would love to see more from you!
Frostpaw
2007-01-14 . chapter 1
Aw...I liked the lyrics you changed.

I always wondered why Liesl put up with Rolfe telling her what to do, too. Honestly...
Goddess of Grammar
2007-01-10 . chapter 1
That was lovely. Well done.
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