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Reviews For: Hypothetical Rain

Bellabun
2007-01-15
ch 1,
abuseI enjoyed it, I think you captured them correctly. I wouldn't mind reading more. I think I will add you to my list. Teehee
follow-ur-dreams
2007-01-10
ch 1,
abuseAw that was such a cute story! Temp and Booth would be so damn cute together if they'd just hurry it up! :p great story line too, and i'd love to see it become a series. Great job i loved it!

-Corinna
Cora Clavia
2007-01-10
ch 1,
abuseNice job.
babylil
2007-01-10
ch 1,
abuseYour narrator's very amusing :)
Midnight's Angelic Guardian
2007-01-10
ch 1,
abuseYeah, I've never bought a sudden relationship from these two either. I'm similar to Tempe in that I have no interest in getting married ever, and I can tell you there's no way some guy is going to change that in five minutes, just by telling me he loves me. So, for that I really liked this piece.
Oh, and by the way, if you still are looking for a beta, I'm more than willing to help out. What kind of HP stuff do you do? I'm always looking for good HP fic authors. If you're interested in seeing what I do, just send me a sample work and I'll beta that and get it back to you, so you can decide if you want to work with me. If you're not, that's cool too.
I look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.
Katherine
squint-squad
2007-01-09
ch 1,
abuseI really don't buy the whole sudden relatonship thin either! This has got to be one of the most perfect fics I´ve ever read, please continue the story, and in the name of Brennan, make it normal speed! I´d like to see a Cam sees Bren and Booth doing anything together chapter sometime, but it might be too soon for anything drastic. Love the story, please continue because it has great potential.

Lvs! Squinty
Bsquared19
2007-01-09
ch 1,
abuseGreat story! Nice emotion!

I like how Booth gets mad and then realizes it's him.

Nice style, easily understood, clear.

How about another?!
Ronata
2007-01-09
ch 1,
abusesweet story thanks
Questionablelight
2007-01-09
ch 1,
abuseWoo! A HP friend too! Do you ship? (that’s where I started on this site :P)

Yeah, generally I liked your style. There where a few sarcastic sounding bits that I’m not sure belonged there, and I also wasn’t sure if they were a narrated inserts, or rather a thought from Brennan (example the clarification bit- it just didn’t flow from the emotion of the previous bit.)

But yeah... Great work, pretty original too (which is brilliant!)

Cheers!

(Oh and if you need a Beta, I’m more than happy to help...)
WinchesterWench
2007-01-09
ch 1,
abuseI really liked it!! Please continue!! I think the characterization was spot on too :oD

Kay x
jess.stretch
2007-01-09
ch 1,
abuseI absolutely loved it! I laughed out loud at the aquaint his foot with the other bloke's arse bit, that was genius.
Your story was really good, with no OOC characters or situations. Well done.
If you need a beta, I could give it a go, if you want. I do my own beta-ing, so if you read my story, Explanations,it should give you a taste of my beta skills. Let me know.
Hope to see more from you in the future, Jess
JadedOne47
2007-01-09
ch 1,
abuseHey there
Ok, so i really liked that. I think you could make it a series, maybe let her know that he goes to talk with her mother, see what the others say, including the vile Cam. (ya know, I've actually only seen season one coz I'm in Oz, but i still hate her. Oh, and she was in Serenity).
So, keep it up. What is HP?
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