I just runned in to your story today and it surprised me. Very diferent approach from the episode. It was very interesting see what happening at that moment through Kelly's eyes. I'm still feeling not enough satisfied with what the producers and writers of the show offered to us after GD. God, how could they simply missed such great oportunity to explore all the characters feelings and consequences of that insane act...well unfortunatelly they're the bosses but fortunately there are great fic writers and fans working hard to compensate their faults. Thanks for sharing great one shot. I'm excited to know you're working on another multi chapter. Go ahead!

Finaly someone see's her the way I do, a sweet girl who was just in the wrong place at the wrong time, just like Nick was. What happened to Kelly was so unfair and horible, and her stupid dad only made it worce. I love the fact that someone finaly stood up for her. That was...words don't say it. AMAZING!

wow...this was truly incredible. This was really well written, and it took me a little bit, but I finally got it was talking about Kelly in Daddy's Little Girl...this is really angsty (Which of COURSE means I love it!) and extremely well written...

Bravo!

-Futuremisscsi60

great short story, this is really good, i like the kelly gordon u have made. I hope u don't loose fait in OOHW, its still really good, looking forward to future stories!