well i just gotta say this, i absolutely love this story, it deserves far more reviews than it has. The dimension between the demolition boys and kai is fantastic - and the loyalty the bladebreakers(minus ray)have for kai. plus all the yaoi smut is just lovely. - added to favs!
hope you update this soon.
b shadow

None stop I have been reading your story. It's addictive, cunning and grand! I've never read anything like it! Your work not only intrigues me, but inspires me to write my own story of suspense. Thank you.

Please post soon! You have a loyal reader this instant!

~Kirstai

dude poor tala i hope that he comes out ok but i still loved the chapter any wayz it was awesome!!

This is getting interesting. Cant wait for more. Please update soon
:-)

OMG this chapter was so good!!

OMG! Kaikai to the rescue! Save Tala, Kaikai! Lol I like infuriated Kaikai, he'z so strong and manly, i found it funny when Alexander thought "he looks as dangerous as Voltaire" Alexander is a weeaklin man, but OH NO Tala'z gonna think Kaikai BRETAYED him D:! D: Poor Kaikai... But maybe he'll love him again after he saves his pale **? Will Kai really take over?! I LOVE how Voltaries all proud and junk "this is my grandson!" Omg just how I pictured it! xD I think we're on the same brainwave, haha, or maybe you've just had stephie overdose...

...Not the point xD

Anyway Awesome Chapter!

GREAT JOB!

Thx for updating!

Come back online!

Write more!

Um... YES I think that'z all i have to say

signed

ZeE GrEaT IiXnE

P.S

Question still remainz, if Bryan didn't hurt that lady- who did?! = O dun dun DUN! = 3

At the end of that...I just don't know what to say. This chapter's really gone and jumpstarted the plot, everything seems to be coming to a head. I'm jumping around down here waiting to see what's going to happen next, I'm on edge throughout this whole thing.


Though if I were to say anything, I nearly choked on my tea through all that talk of "fruitful loins"...

Poor bryan. Love this story. please continue to update
:-)

E it's been updated!! I shall now ask... Will "Breaking The Rules" be updated? I love that story...

Bryan has he voice of reason (and probably just loves Christmas - A LOT. Teehee).

SQUEE. That was just... So... CUTE!! AW, when Kai gave the ring to Tala, I was quite literally grinning with joy XD

Oh so who did rape and beat Yelena?! I don't belive it was Bryan =( I hope she survives!!

Update soon?

yay! you finally updated. i love this ficcie to death, but poor bryan. he actually didnt do it this time.

0_0 so Bryan stabbed someone and came back later to wanna save? OPh dear, heaven rains blood!
lol
FINALLY, it is about time you upload, you got me worried.
THe scene with Emily and Micheal is so adorable and sweet. I love it.
For the first time in fanfics, I don't hate Tyson LOL for once he is doing the right thing@!!
Oh lying Rei is so new! and fun!

Ok ok get going for more now, I dont want to wait another like half a year for another upload so get going NOW! *whip*
thanks for the upload >_

aww thats sad i was really hoping that bryan might have actually found someone that he didn't want to hurt and then actually wouldn't but either way it adds to the story which I love by the way and cant wait for the next chapter!

i don't think Bryan was the one hurting Yelena, maybe it was Boris? don't know, so good to read an update :) hope you update again soon :D

Fabulous...just great! I was beside myself waiting for this to be updated, and now that it has been...I'm beside myself waiting for chapter 16!


Definitely one of my favourtie stories, keep it going!

Nice one though a bit morbid. I hope Kai finishes his business with Voltaire soon. =D