Very good, I like what you have done, it seems oddly familiar to something else I read tho (I had a sense of Deja Vu when reading) Anyhow, very good. Loved your work, and you should definately continue. I can't wait to read the post season four part of the fic you mentioned.

love this one!! go one!

Great story, it's a really good way of sorta "watching" the season again. I especially like the way you describe their thoughts, really suits them...

Hey, I really enjoyed both the Tony and Michelle pieces. You obviously write well; my advice would be to go further beyond the episode transcript and tell us what happens in between what we've seen, or focus more on the internal thoughts of our protagonists. Another idea would be to combine both T and M's perspectives in one piece. I would love to see you continue, but I think the way you're going will take so long for you to write and I personally would rather read what you add to the story than what I can see on a DVD. I hope that doesn't sound too critical; please believe that I am only saying this because your writing impressed me and I'd love to see it grow and cntain more of the thoughts you express so well. Thanks for posting, and I look forward to see if and how you continue this. I particularly look forward to your post-season 4 piece.