So i'm feeling a sequel... who's with me? haha kidding.. kinda. But seriously this story was to incredibly amazing it gave me goosebumps. You kept Hidan in character perfectly which is really hard to do. Completely incredible, sheer genius. *goes and reads profile* Hey! you're a U of T student! That means you're right near me, sweet! ... wow... I hope that didn't come off as too stalkerish...

AMAZING STORY LOVE IT

Utterly freaky. But I like it. I like how it was a psychological mind-screwer, I like how they just went on hating each other. I like how Temari felt this deep, primal urge to kill him, so strong that it overrode reason and rationality. I like how Hidan saw Temari as his one salvation, how she might just be the one to kill him. And I hope Temari does get the chance to kill him.

Your stories take my breath away. Your perception of character depth is way off the charts. It's completely amazing, seriously. I knew the characters at first, and now it's like I know them so well they're my best friends. You made them come alive. You are amazing, honestly. I never even considered Temari and Hidan as a pairing, but you made me see how their personalities work together, so deeply. Hidan x Temari is one of my very favorite pairings now.
I myself am and aspiring writer, and I only have a few role models. One is Stephenie Meyer, since her characters are so extremely real. Another is Kishimoto, for coming up with such unique characters and such complicated plot. Another is JK Rowling, for amazing plot development that keeps everyone guessing. Another is CS Lewis, because the Narnia series was genius. And you are another one - the only one that isn't truly published - because you take these characters and make them into more then they ever were before. It completely blows me away. I hope you publish a story of your own one day. I'll definitely be in line to read it.

damn, getting angsty. this is a fricken good story.

omfg, this has got to be the best hidan or temari story i have ever read! i was addicted and i couldn't stop reading, i wish you could make a sequal or something, maybe another hidan/temari story. =]

Wow.

I absolutely loved this story. Very twisted and engaging, I enjoyed it thoroughly beginning to end. Excellent characterizations of all involved, I loved the portrayals or the interactions between Temari and Hidan.

Keep up the good work!

love this story!

I just read the entire story and I really liked your descriptions and details. I especially liked the part where Temari had to take that test and the "blurr of patterns on the floor". or whatever. sorry, I completely butchered that, but yeah, I liked that a lot.

Hidan really made me laugh. He seemed so ignorant of Temari's anguish in the beginning. I found that humorous. I don't think Temari has much experience in the romance department either. ; )

The parallels between love and hate was really amazing. Twisting lovey-dovey sentences to make it fit into the hatred category was effective in drawing the parallels. I've never experienced love/hate so I can't comment on how realistic it was, but based on what I've heard and read your descriptions seem pretty accurate.

I don't really pay attention to details when I read, sad to say, and I was really amazed at how you remembered the power in the cameras and stuff like that. (you're definitely smarter and more attentive than me though. hehe.)

Really enjoyed the story. I added you to my favorite author's list. The only one there so far. ; )

this is an amazing story. i'm glad that someone is doing a story on TenTen, there's so few of them :)

I love you. I feel really weird for saying that, but I do. See, I go through cycles of what I want to read, and I'm always really happy when I come across something as macabre as this-when it's well written. Thank you for posting this, to allow others to read what you write. Also, thank you for wasting your precious time reading a reader's review. I appreciate it.

But was it really a hallucination, because I can seriously see Hidan tking time out of his day-a mission, even, just to mess with her. Oh well. I guess it's a mystery. Now I must leave this review, in order to read more of this fascination tale.

If reviews are ridiculous amounts of love, then you are ridicously loved by me! Alas, but I cannot wait to read more, so my review is short.

This was an amazing piece of work. We don't know that much about Hidan and Temari from the manga, but the way you wrote them was believable and made it easy for the reader to believe that their strange and disturbing dynamic was real to a T. Hidan's level of insanity was portrayed perfectly, as was Temari's obsession and hatred, which made it easy to follow her descent into madness of sorts. You did a wonderful job messing with Hidan's head, Temari's head, and hell, my head too. The comparisons that you drew between love and hate were insightful and psychologically spot-on. I don't normally read stuff like this, but in this instance I am so very glad I did - it was definitely different, and it gave me a thrill that I haven't gotten from fanfiction in a while.

Oh my God.

I have never, in my life, stayed to read an entire fanfiction like this.

I was pulled in by someone's favorites, and I started reading at about eight. Maybe seven thirty.

My siblings have been bugging me to go to sleep, and, even though I'm tired and my body is stiff from sitting so long, I couldn't leave.

This has never happened to me, even with the release of the last Harry Potter book, or another book that I've waited forever for.

No, this, this is different. I literally flipped out when my mouse stopped working, and I nearly tore the house apart looking for new batteries. I thought I would start bashing my head in when I thought we were out of double A.

This story has captured me entirely, and I will tell you this, even if it makes you feel bad, good, I don't care.

This is the first and only story that I could ever really get into.

I've read a LOT of things, believe me. I've started reading when I was three. I've always read whenever I can.

I've always been searching for something on here, I guess, that would give me these feelings. Now I've found it.

I didn't even think that words could describe such emotions, but I guess I was wrong. You've managed to do the impossible.

And, I'm not saying this to make you feel better, or good, whatever, but... You are my favorite author, even if it is just fanfiction. You've captured more than their character, their words. You have their souls.

So cheers, because I am honestly writing down your username for later, because I promised my younger brother I would sleep. Believe me, I am going to be back and read everything else you've written.

I never thought I could find perfection.

Wrong again.

I don't think I've ever enjoyed a heftily physiological story. I always felt they were contrived, unbelievable, nonsensical, and basically just too screwy.

Well...I couldn't stop reading this. Good God, when I first heard about this story I thought 'could never work.' Just couldn't. But Holy Hell this was absolutely mind-blowing! I couldn't stop. Just couldn't. I'd probably heard the cliche 'Love and Hate can be very similar' some thousand times. Never I had thought to encounter a story that so brilliantly outlined how they could be so twistedly similar... and make me believe it. Forget fanficiton! This is one of the most artfully crafted pieces and styles of literature I've seen in ages!

Might there ever be a sequel in which Temari actually goes, digs him up, and finishes what was started? Or does that sound just too anti-climactic?

Anyway, as I said, this story was a frame-wracking read. And you just completely took all the thrill out of the Cannon Shika.vs.Hidan arc for me. Heh. But then, after this read, I wouldn't have it any other way.