Oh, rather lovely. Fiyero's head is an awfully interesting place to explore.

And Galinda in her underwear is never a bad image... Thank you for the last line ;)

Oh, that was awesome. It's rare to see Fiyero as a sympathetic character in Gelphie fics, and he was wonderful here.

That final line was -perfect-.

He chuckled slightly and thought, “Maybe, if I can pull this off long enough, they could let me watch.”

Fiyero couldn’t help but grin widely at the thought of that.

XD Not unless I get to watch first! Lol. Love it! Haha. Another masterpiece!

Cool idea!

"when he had found Glinda straddling Elphaba’s lap, in only her underwear, in the girls' dorm room. The two were locked in a passionate kiss when Elphaba glanced over and suddenly pushed Glinda off of her."

I really don't know why, but this line made me burst into hysterical laughter. :D

“Maybe, if I can pull this off long enough, they could let me watch.”

Ha, typical male.

Anyway, I loved this!

Loved it :) Amusing ending too!

XDD thats awesome dude, you ish like, my new best friend a lesbian who likes Rent , Wicked, and yuri? we could be twins lol

haha, great ending!

AH! I want to read more!

There's some good potential in this story - I want to find out if Fiyero goes off the edge with their "charade". The style is blunt and you portray the character with very up front personalities.

And hey - Elphaba and Glinda in their underwear... it's cool.

Update soon! XD

Haha. Silly Fiyero. I feel bad for him though. Great job!

oh my god, Fiyero gets pervy lol, I like the image you created for when he walked in.

I don't read slash usually, but I happened upon this one.. I have to say I loved Fiyero's last line. People in the computer lab are still staring at me for laughing hysterically for no apparent reason.

"So he would continue as the protector of the two women and their reputations. He chuckled slightly and thought, “Maybe, if I can pull this off long enough, they could let me watch.”

that line is love! It made me choke on my coffee. I read it 3 times and I'm still laughing! Oh Fiyero!

WOW! I love it! I especially love how the girl gets the girl. Super job.

What a nice early morning diversion that was. Althouth I do feel a little sorry for Fiyero. A bit sketchy and rushed, but that's understandable with the nightmare day you were in for. Hope it all went well.

It's a nice little short story.

You are becoming quite a good Gelphie author, though I must say.

I think the entire story needs to be expanded upon a bit more.

But overall, Jolly good one, B.

-N