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| davilnamedangel 2008-02-23 ch 3,  | abusei really liked ur story, you should write more starwar finfics |
| Kelev 2007-02-25 ch 3, | abuseGreat job! Hey, if this was a challenge, may I try my hand at it too? It's an interesting idea. |
| jedi71 2007-02-20 ch 3, | abuseI think you are trying to become my favorite author, I started crying towards the end, what a wonderful story thanks for posting it. 7one |
| mlinyaia 2007-01-19 ch 3, | abuseIts a good story :) shame it came to an end :( please write some more and i loved this one. Poor Obi-Wan doing al that hard work but it was so cute of him to do that and he got in trouble for it, well i guess thats not good! Sarah x |
| Ann Jinn 2007-01-19 ch 3, | abuseVery well done story. How easy misunderstandings can creep in. It takes a big master to admit his mistakes too. Great job with this challenge. |
| Ann Jinn 2007-01-18 ch 2, | abuseAh, but no one has asked Obi Wan why. Great chapter. Many frustrations revealed. Expensive Birthday present? Many things could come out yet. |
| i luv ewansmile 2007-01-14 ch 2, | abuseYah know what? I do believe I've read this story before. Have you posted it anywhere else? Possibly, he Jedi Council Boards? |
| mlinyaia 2007-01-14 ch 2, | abuseo whats Obi-Wan need the credits for, Qui-Gon can't punish him too much i hope he doesn't. Please update soon :) |
| Ann Jinn 2007-01-10 ch 1, | abuseExcellent start. What could that young man be up to? What dark thoughts does Qui Gon have? Obi Wan will be a knight come anything. Wow. Can hardly wait for more. |
| mlinyaia 2007-01-10 ch 1, | abuseO whats gonna happen? please update soon :) |
| i luv ewansmile 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abuseAw, I have an inkling as to what Obi-wan is up to. Oh, Quigon is going to be for a big surprize if I'm right,I hope so. This chapter was very well written, I love the details like, I could easlly visualize everything, and Quigon feeling all of his fifty years, and gah, even bringing up Xanatos was good. I cn't wait for more! More soon please! |