that...was so sad and sweet! this is one of my favorite fanfics ever!

Aw! That was so sweet! I loved it! Good Job!

That was so sad! But really well writen.

the last line was like a blow on my face. wow. he talks to her picture; reminds me of cardcaptor sakura ^^

That last line just TUGGED on my heart strings. That was so sad! Oh my God, and Roxas talking to her picture? SO depressing. Although I have to say, I think it could have been longer. Like more relationship development? So we could know how close they really were? I dunno, it just seemed very rushed. But despite that, this was very good.

Oh my gosh, I cried at Roxas' last line! I love your writing style!

You just punched me in the face.
Jeez; I was on the edge of tearing!
My, that was a perfect ending, too.
Sadness.
But I love it.

aw...that's so incredibly sad! I love the subtlely -- not too wordy and cluttered. It's perfect.

so sad!
i loved it
but why did she havta die
*sobs*