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| InspiredChaos 2008-04-21 ch 6,  | abuseI was really hoping for a happy ending, but that ending seems to fit more. Awesome story. Very original! |
| Konotsu 2007-11-18 ch 6, | abuseGreat story! If they didn't know that he killed his dad, then why is he in jail? I know, stupid question but I'm confused. Great story though. |
| fantoallwritertonone 2007-06-26 ch 6, | abuseyour story is good sad but that is expected plus not everything ends happy |
| ArabellaKye 2007-05-28 ch 6, | abuseAWESOME STORY! Very Interesting! Love Ashley's character. You ROCK!Good Ending! |
| Super Ninja Nydia 2007-04-09 ch 6, | abuseOh wow that was...wow. I liked it quite a lot. I must say you're quite the writer. I'm looking forward to furture updates to your other story and possibe new stories if you write anymore. Bravo and Good Work. You have earned a place on my favorite writter list. =] Nydia |
| Juicy Fruit Girl 2007-03-13 ch 6, | abuseas much as I hate to admit it...I really did love this story. I was really hoping for a happy ending though. But thats the beauty of this story..there is no happy ending, which makes it better. It really sucks that this story ended just as I started getting into it, but perhaps I shall go read some or your other work..hopefully it will be as good as this. so..Until we meet again, peace out. |
| Lacrymose 2007-03-06 ch 6, | abuseThat's messed up. Poor guy |
| robo-vamp 2007-03-02 ch 6, | abuseAH...whys you make it end I was starting to REALLY like it... *huffs* Great fic though |
| dorkyduck 2007-03-01 ch 6, | abuseaw sad! I love it tho! seriously awesome. Poor dude. he'll go to prison forever! i'll make him cookies! your a good writer. |
| dorkyduck 2007-02-28 ch 5, | abuseNO!HE'S NOT ALOUD TO LEAVE! ill kick mr.sir! i really like this chappie! update soon! |
| naruto_rules03 2007-02-09 ch 4, anon. | abuseAww I love your story. It's very original (unlike mine) and creative. I also like your writing style. I think his crimes may have been slightly exaggerated (if that's how you spell it) but apart from that it's really good. Please check out mine: Girl without a past. It's either a couple underneath yours unless I finish the chapter i'm about to write in which case it's above. ^^ |
| InMyOwnWords 2007-02-08 ch 4, | abuseI luv it! update |
| robo-vamp 2007-02-08 ch 4, | abusethis is cool...more original than the girl ones keep it up please...update soon |
| Juicy Fruit Girl 2007-02-07 ch 4, | abusewow this chapter wasn't as good as the others, but I still liked it. Ashely's life makes me sad, and if he were real, I'd want to give him a hug. Even though he would probably kill me for it. Anyway...update soon, mmkay?? PS: did you see lost tonight?? wasn't it CRAZY!! |
| dorkyduck 2007-02-06 ch 4, | abusegood chapter! u deserve a cookie. any flavor. Stephanie, i want to smack her. feel my wrath... update soon! |