The ending is perfect.

lawl~

Your Holic fics are probably the closest ones to canon.

aw, what a splendid fall evening indeed!

Aw cute!

So swet (!) I loved.

short but sweet.

So good! Very short, but very sweet. Short and fluffy, just the way I like 'em. XD
Nicely done, I particularly liked the fact that "they’d leaned over and kissed each other". It makes a nice change from the usual, their first kiss would being one-sided (which party being which the only variation).

Aww that was really cute. And amusing at the end. :)

I love this story, it's very sweet. I made my sister read it & she even liked it, so kudos to you =]

That was so pretty, and sweet... and quite funny in the last line!

*sniff* That was so cool... I love romance!

yay! yaoi! i liked the line where Watanuki called Domeki retarted. That was golden.