aww how cute! I jsut ador Remi/Siri well actually Siri/Remi... and yes, im a big Orgy fan.. ^.^;; i used to know everything about Jay gordon.. sad nay?
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dude- not creepy. cool- very rhythmic. the end kinda breaks the pattern a bit, but it's fitting. awesome work!

i like the author's notes!!! muwahahahaha!! never read harry potter, so i wouldn't know a damn! for all i know that crazy lady writes like you do and all the little gnomes and witches look lustily at the other witches and gnomes across the room, despite their being the same gender!! hahahahha!!! i love the style!! (can u tell it's 2 in the morning??)

Darling, I think personally you get the most out of fics where you can write in poetry/prose/stream of thought. It's how I love to write! This is on my list! Yea!

awww that was soo very poetic. I like it!

*sings* "I, have become comfortably numb..." Well, Pink Floyd is the Sh!t, so there!! Love it hun, as usuall. If I didn't know you, I'd think that you were on acid, *laughs* you on acid, right!! Well, I think I should stop now!!

ooh, good fic! I like the style, with the sets of 4 verbs. That was a good touch.