hehehe very nic Lisa. Gott lov the end "Who did what?!?!?!?!" lollers!
Update as soon as ya can matey =D

Keep it up! I can't wait for the next chappy!

Cool! This sounds like it's going to be a good story-I can't wait to see how the girls are going to react! Anyways, keep writing and update soon! x

Yo yO Yo, its me again, and u know what I've gotta say for this fic since we're speaking to each other on the phone, lol!
Anyway, I'll just stick it here anyhu. Its a gud start...ur punctuation is improving, and thats cool. Wanna know what happens next so update as soon as u can.