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Amethyst Asheryn
2007-06-22 . chapter 4
That ruled. I just have one question. ...Oh. Wait. Never mind, I don't. LOL. Anyway, another great story! :) I liked this one a lot, too.
Amethyst Asheryn
2007-06-22 . chapter 3
Poor guy. Gotta be confusing, having a mission to kill your enemies and then befriending aforementioned enemy leader's heir as well as his best warriors. (ah, scrap that. We all ready know it's confusing, I'm just being Captain Obvious again.) good chapter. I can't wait to see how this is all going to turn out, so off to read the next chapter now!
Nikkler
2007-03-31 . chapter 4
Yay! Leia is dead! and plus Quatre is with Trowa for ever!! Great story! Huggles
Nikkler
jess-eklom
2007-01-26 . chapter 4
great story! I liked the way you managed to finish it off, but what happened to the other boys? I look foward to the epilogue
calen383
2007-01-24 . chapter 4
I love this. I do wish there was more though. :( I want to see an epilogue! Great job!

To critique a little: there were a few typos throughout the story, though they aren't major. And the last page some of the html didn't go though. :)
SkittleGoddess
2007-01-24 . chapter 4
Yes I may be sad for it to end, but it was a great fic. I loved the moral and the ending. Great work.
littlefox1227
2007-01-24 . chapter 3
oh! what a great fic! i can tell you got the idea from "the lion king 2" i can't wait for chapter 4! please update soon!! pretty please! ^_^
Yellow Momo
2007-01-15 . chapter 3
I just can say one thig: it's amazing! Continous please!

kissus
Ichia
2007-01-15 . chapter 3
hi! I just finished reading the fic when I was in physics lol and so I could not post a review while I was in school (with the damn highschool internet) anyways

I loved it! like a lot a lot a lot!

awn Trowa had a nightmare ;0;

anyways, update soon!

ta-da!
phoenixfirekitsune
2007-01-15 . chapter 3
I think it's cute how Heero is so protective of Quatre. I love it! I like the way how Heero 'bonded' with Trowa too. I can't wait until the next update! Update soon please!
jess-eklom
2007-01-15 . chapter 3
This was a very exciting chapter and I REALLY can't wait to see more of this story. I like it that Heero opened up about his outsider status and I would love to hear about the other "outsiders" too. Poor Trowa... I see lots of Trowa-angst coming up. But hey! At least they're trusting him now. At least a little, right?

Maybe he'll find out that the Barton rule was actually not a good time and that letting them back into control would be the bad choice... I hope he starts to sympathize with the Winners after hearing the story and side with them. I want him to come out and tell Quat what he was really there for and warn him of the threat.

OH! and I love the 1x2 impications in this chapter. Yep... this chapter really made my day >^.^<

Keep writing!
SkittleGoddess
2007-01-15 . chapter 3
Ohwee. This is good. Its cool how Heero told Trowa of this past and how he is now associated with the Winner tribe. And seeing Trowa turn on his brother had me bouncing in my seat. I can only image what will happen when the other find out what Trowa's real plan is supposed to be. Awesome work. Later.
kari073
2007-01-14 . chapter 3
Oh, it's getting good... I am so excited about your work here and can barely wait for more! I am interested in how Heero and Duo got together, too... would you consider writing a prequel with their story once this one is completed?
Markanovanlink
2007-01-14 . chapter 3
I really enjoyed the adventure that your fic illustrates. You have done a great job with the storyline and characters. Will the next chapter be the last or will you draw it out some more?
mokona
2007-01-12 . chapter 2
Can't... Breathe... hahahahahahahahahahaha Oh My God this is so good. Please keep going, update. We want to see this. It's perfect, hee hee. Trowa omg hahaha oh all of it is so damn good.
Love Ya Lots
Mokona ;3 PUU
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