Wow, I loved this!

You really get drawn in by these drabbles. I love Envy and Sloth.

Very well written!

J x

LOVED IT! I didn't realize you had this many stories up...

Lust, unsurprisingly, is my fav of the 7 =)

wow... that was interesting! and very good, also.

I really enjoyed these drabbles. This story does a fantastic job of delivering both a visual and a visceral punch with an economy of words that I envy. When I read it I had the image of Trelawney reading the cards for Severus and Hermione. (Do you think she ever offers to?) On each card was an image from your story. I could definitely see this story inspiring fan art, and if I had the skills to I would make some for you.

Very well written, intense.

A praiseworthy set of seven sins!

Envy just makes your heart break for Severus's dashed hopes; he's had so few.

I'm still smiling over Gluttony. Hermione certainly was caught with her hand in the biscuit tin.

Severus's took perfect advantage of Hermione's situation in Avarice. How, very Slytherin of him!

Lust draws the reader in and keeps them thinking about it. Is Severus corporeal? Was Hermione sent to capture of kill Severus. If she 'comforts' Aurors now, was their a bad end to a relationship with a man she shared a password with? However, my choice is that her assignment was merely to do something at the Castle, and she was glad for the opportunity to see Severus. The last paragraph is very lustful indeed; but, I think it portrays quite a bit of emotion, as well.

Sloth would have to be my favourite. You can just feel Severus's satisfaction with his brilliantly made escape. I wonder if he'll be smiling later, though? After all Hermione is dealing with the chaos all by herself while he basks in peace.

Pride is so very well done. You can feel Severus's pain.

Wrath is terribly painful, as well. You portrayed Hermione's pain and frustration so very vividly. You make the reader feel how torn apart she is by these two men. It's excruciatingly brilliant.

An excellent set of drabbles!

:D

O...wow, this just drew me right in. I love all the different scenarios. Once again, a most excellent job. Perfect characterization, imaginative titles, and wonderful writing.

Thank you for sharing!

EXCELLENT

Wow, oh wow! Excellent 100 words for each one of these sins. Especially liked Wrath and Envy (and Sloth for comic relief!).