This is one of the most powerful stories I have read. I'm really thankful for the privilege of being able to read it. Very touching, very sad; you captured the depth of feeling magnificently. Added to favourites.

Wow... that was really sad, but also really true. I think that's probably exactly what would have happened. Well something close to it anyways, you know, without David, Mary, and Rose. It was really good though!

It's nice that this is finally published. Real mirror of sorrow and things that just happen so cruelly, and shatters lives. A bit too tragic for a weekend read, but nevertheless it strikes home. Well done.

that's terrible. i'm glad james actually saved snape's life. it would have been awful for that to happen

The emotional trip I've gone on while reading this - it's intense. A good kind of intense: you've not lost your talent for writing, especially when it comes to describing emotions.
Lily reminded me of Harry in this chapter, like when she had the urge to laugh when she was threatening Sirius.

Positevely, absoulutely, heart-wrenching AMAZING! 12 bazillion jillion stars!

It's okay for an AU, I guess.