That was the saddest, coolest story I've seen on here. Seriously, that was awesome. Your writing is great and the whole idea is brilliant. I loved the part where Rose's Emergency Program comes up. I was tearing up at that, it was great, very emotional and well written. I also loved the end, I thought you ended it real well. Great job!

This is so beautifully descriptive, so very very sad and alone... I can't imagine anything being left out at all. If he thinks it, you've written it. It got me so down and depressed, and then he notices "Bad Wolf" and my spirit lifts... but then it seems to just pass, and once again, nothing can be done. That is, until your very last line. =P The hope of the Doctor's idea growing into fruition has made this all worth it, and I'm so very eager to see how you continue this and hopefully pull him out of his terrible situation!