Loved the ending!

Hehe! I like the way you used the phrase Grin of Impossible Charm to describe Jack. I really enjoyed this. Imagine how cool it would be to see this filmed.

Hey! I really enjoyed this. Sure, the situation's rather contrived, but it's fun and well-written. I'm glad you continued it ... on to read more.

very nice

LOL! oh he's a terror isn't he? Jack determined to annoy them to no end! LOL! knew they'd get together! just playing twister? mhm. that'll be right.

lol, luv it, great fic.

LMAO! Brilliant ending! Those two arn't as innosent as they seemXD

Hahahaha! Brilliant ending! keep writting!

Emma

This story is really good. I find it rather amusing.

AH! my poor eyes please tell me the doctor doesn't really wear a thong lie to me if you have to!

lol that was good. i cant wait for more. this is going to be more right?

hahahaha! Bless! Great! keep writting!

Emma

Ok that was just Eww on so many levels. The mental image just caused me to relieve my coffee .:pause:. through my nose.

Freaking Hillarious! You should do a follow up

Kira

Hahaha! Oh god I love those three!

Ahyes, postitus, a common diease amoungst the fanfiction world. The cure? Write more!

Emma