Ok. Lol ending after chapeter 6 would be great XD

"I love you, too." Happy ending yay~ but not so because I still want to know what happens to Aang XP

It would be a great time for a lame cliche ending x3

But anyways, I've loved the story so far. I think you captured Toph really well! A lot of authors tend to write her and a seeing blind person. But you put her blindness and her 'sight' into a really neat balance, showing her limits while showing her strengths.

Can't wait to keep reading later!

good fic over all but toph is a better earth bender than aang but i loved this fic and hope u make more fics likeit

This story was incredible. You've inspired my to find more Katoph. Thank you for the story and lovely, wonderful journey.

BTW I just gotta say if it weren't for the Avatar powers Toph would have wiped the floor with Aang. That should have been a rule.

beautiful! i loved it! ♥
awesome! REALLY

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED YOUR STORY ESPECIALLY THE ENDING,I FOUND THE FACT THAT KATARA GAVE TOPH HER MOTHER'S NECKLACE VERY ROMANTIC.MY ONLY COMPLAINT IS THE FACT THAT YOUR STORY HAS NO CLOSURE.IN THE END YOU LEFT THE READER UNSURE IF AANG EVER TRULY FORGIVES KATARA OR IF HE FINDS ANOTHER LOVE.

OTHER THAN THAT I ENJOYED YOUR STORY IMMENSELY.KEEP WRITING!

I...don't have constructive criticism for you. I don't have any criticism at all.

This story is just...beautiful. I don't know what else to say.

Thank you so much for writing it.

This is my absolute favorite Katoph ever. Sensual without being pornographic, great descriptions, people stay in character, terrific plot - magnifique! *kisses fingers*

This is beautiful.

You take a simple concept and you run with it- and I am so glad I was trawling through avatar fanfiction today, else I would not have found this.

I think the characters are spot on, the story itself is wonderful, and I love the simple, clean description of their world. The dancer-and-flautist couple are pure love.

I am unbelieveably happy this story was written. Thankyou!

This story was unbelievably good, it literally had me at the edge of my seat hoping for the best. I love Aang, I think he's an awesome character but this story actually had me furious at him at one point and he didn't even do anything. I love how you ended it as well, it's safe to say I love all of it.

I read this story earlier on deviantArt, and I've just re-read it, and I thought I'd just say what a great story it is, and how wonderfully you've written it.
This is the first Katara x Toph I ever read, and still one of the best i've found anywhere.
Thankyou ^_^

i still love this story, even before i got this account xD
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I'd say that this is the best toph x katara written piece EVER and by FAR

I love how you ended this. It's so...perfect. I wondered about it the whole time I didn't have internet and I'm glad I finally got to re-read and finish it. Out of curiousity, are you planning a sequel or any other Katoph fics?

i'm loving this! keep it up!

I absolutely love this fic. :) There are no words to describe the utter brilliance of it.

I especially liked the fight scene between Aang and Toph (and will probably use it as future reference for my fic...but only if you don't mind). The artwork is awesome too.

What can I say? This fic is just really good. :) Very inspirational. (and it only took me now to get enough nerve just to say all that...)

Oh, the end almost made me cry! lol! Great job! 10/10!