 687678 7/18/06 . chapter 4ooh, mark is angryy...update more plz! |
 Ailly 8/3/04 . chapter 5 I don't normally post a "review" when I don't have much to say, but I'm making an exception this time because I really want to see more of it. I'd post crits but I don't have any. _ Please, post another chapter! |
 eviica 12/13/01 . chapter 5 I like it. I really like it! |
 Katelyn 12/6/01 . chapter 5 WOW i love the way you write the characters, just finished chapter 5 looking foward to chapter 6. Please keep posting. |
 Astrid 9/21/01 . chapter 5"You know what, Roger? It won't be okay. It'll be ed up. And that kid will just have to deal with the fact that he's got selfish for a father." Wow. Powerful line. And great story. I love your Mark characterization, it's exactly the way I try to convey him, only you do it a lot better. I completely adore this and demand more. Chapter 5 seemed a little rushed, but as long as it's going somewhere, it works. And you have really short, but poignant (sp?) paragraphs. I love this, have I said that yet, cause I do. More please. |
 FieryRogue 9/21/01 . chapter 5OKay, you've got me... I love how this is going... :) *desperately waits for more* LOL. |
 FieryRogue 9/20/01 . chapter 1I love it so far. I'm eager to read on. (I'm at the beginning of Ch. 4 right now.) |
 Drama Queen 9/7/01 . chapter 5 Add more soon, good story, I wanna know what happens w/ Roger and Mimi and the baby |
 Plexi 8/24/01 . chapter 5FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT! Okie..over it. Very good, want to see what happens |
 sillyg 7/19/01 . chapter 5More! I want More! Keep updating! |
 linnell 7/18/01 . chapter 5I really like how this is written. The short prose works nicely. There are a few spelling mistakes, nothing a little proof reading won't help. You got me hooked so keep going. |
 Aniella 7/14/01 . chapter 4 Great story! Keep going I'm anxious to see the reunion. There isin't much Rent fanfic but of the ones I've read this is definately one of the best. :) |
 Kait rookie2k 7/12/01 . chapter 4 Awww...poor Roger...poor Mark... Keep going _ |
 ioioioio 7/12/01 . chapter 4This is really good! I like it lots. Mucho goodness if you write more! |
 Rachael 7/12/01 . chapter 4 This is great! I'm really looking forward to the next part! |