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FenixPhoenix
2009-05-06 . chapter 1
Very nicely written. And it is a plausible way of how it all begin. I love your portrayals. Great job.
Jia Min
2008-10-02 . chapter 1
it is ok
CrossXFire
2008-08-08 . chapter 1
I'm confused. Is it from the NejiTen LJ Community because you commented "100 Themes Sourced from NejiTen LJ Community" or did you wrote this? Other wised, you’re very creative if you did.
The theme is laughable and the story has an interesting metaphor.

-Are there more? I mean, is there more than this chapter because the title said '100 themes' and I suppose there is more. I only found two so far from your stories list out of 176!
...Hope you continue.
Lydia-hime
2008-07-19 . chapter 1
Hehe.. cute idea with hair. I liked it!
Kane Shi Megami
2007-07-19 . chapter 1
Why do I love this so much? *squee* One of the best team 8 fics out there :)

KSM
superb_oink
2007-06-28 . chapter 1
oh. my. gawd. i had goosebumps all over my body when i read the concluding part. very well said. you're such a great author. *sniff*
junyortrakr
2007-06-05 . chapter 1
Yea, that sounds about like Lee. It surely would be easy to pull one over on him like that. I am more than a little surprised that either Tenten or Neji would know about Samson, though, as Biblical knowledge is very uncommon in that part of the world.
The Reading Maid
2007-05-16 . chapter 1
That was sweet. I think Neji would not look like Neji is he didn't have his incredibly amazing long hair. But the cut looks good on Lee. Good story!
VirtualxSimplicity
2007-02-09 . chapter 1
Cute and very insightful to their team dynamics. :]
VxS
Ohohen
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
Hair. It must be cherished!

That was really good. xP
KasumiDestruction
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
I haven't read anything from you in such a long time. Heck, I haven't read anything from Naruto for such a long time. Or Cardcaptor Sakura. And I still don't know anything about Shaman King. Eheheh. Wonder if you still remember me...

Anyway. I must say your writing style's improved over the years. A lot more fluent and layered. I'm not a NejiTen fan since I don't know enough about Tenten to really like her but this story, I like. Believable right down to Neji's constant refusals, his final compromise, Lee's...yeah and Tenten's relative normalness. Her penchant for slipping into story-telling mode is a nice dimension :) Kudos to you. ^_^

Good luck with your future fics! Now that I've finished my exams, I'll be STALKING! >:3

~Kasumi-chan
Sheo Darren
2007-01-27 . chapter 1
Beautiful! A delightful blend of the funny, serious, shallow, deep, dramatic and romantic. And all revolving around such a simple thing as a haircut. You truly are a genius at evoking and distilling every ounce off fluffy goodness from such mundane items. I bow to you.

I loved the references to the Headless Horseman and Samsung, and how Tenten became Neji's sparring partner, and the play on the 'finality' and 'permanence'. Sweet!

A wonderful story! Moremoremorepleasepleaseplease!
Meh Namee iish Rae
2007-01-26 . chapter 1
This was a wonderful fic to read! Continue writing, syaoran no hime!
ms. phishy
2007-01-25 . chapter 1
That was great! Everyone's personalities were dead-on--especially Neji. Yeah, I think he really does like Lee--underneath all that bastardliness. ^_^ I've always thought that Team Gai had the best teamwork!
Loverly-Loving Fool
2007-01-19 . chapter 1
That was really creative I loved it! I also loved how every time lee askes neji to get his hair cut his response is always "I'm not going to have a hair cut" LOL! That cracked me up.
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