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| roxas-kh 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseHehe.. cute idea with hair. I liked it! |
| Kane Shi Megami 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseWhy do I love this so much? *squee* One of the best team 8 fics out there :) KSM |
| superb_oink 2007-06-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh. my. gawd. i had goosebumps all over my body when i read the concluding part. very well said. you're such a great author. *sniff* |
| junyortrakr 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseYea, that sounds about like Lee. It surely would be easy to pull one over on him like that. I am more than a little surprised that either Tenten or Neji would know about Samson, though, as Biblical knowledge is very uncommon in that part of the world. |
| The Reading Maid 2007-05-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was sweet. I think Neji would not look like Neji is he didn't have his incredibly amazing long hair. But the cut looks good on Lee. Good story! |
| VirtualxSimplicity 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseCute and very insightful to their team dynamics. :] VxS |
| Ohohen 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseHair. It must be cherished! That was really good. xP |
| KasumiDestruction 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI haven't read anything from you in such a long time. Heck, I haven't read anything from Naruto for such a long time. Or Cardcaptor Sakura. And I still don't know anything about Shaman King. Eheheh. Wonder if you still remember me... Anyway. I must say your writing style's improved over the years. A lot more fluent and layered. I'm not a NejiTen fan since I don't know enough about Tenten to really like her but this story, I like. Believable right down to Neji's constant refusals, his final compromise, Lee's...yeah and Tenten's relative normalness. Her penchant for slipping into story-telling mode is a nice dimension :) Kudos to you. ^_^ Good luck with your future fics! Now that I've finished my exams, I'll be STALKING! >:3 ~Kasumi-chan |
| Sheo Darren 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! A delightful blend of the funny, serious, shallow, deep, dramatic and romantic. And all revolving around such a simple thing as a haircut. You truly are a genius at evoking and distilling every ounce off fluffy goodness from such mundane items. I bow to you. I loved the references to the Headless Horseman and Samsung, and how Tenten became Neji's sparring partner, and the play on the 'finality' and 'permanence'. Sweet! A wonderful story! Moremoremorepleasepleaseplease! |
| Explosive Linh-Linh 2007-01-26 ch 1, | abuseThis was a wonderful fic to read! Continue writing, syaoran no hime! |
| ms. phishy 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was great! Everyone's personalities were dead-on--especially Neji. Yeah, I think he really does like Lee--underneath all that bastardliness. ^_^ I've always thought that Team Gai had the best teamwork! |
| Loverly-Loving Fool 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was really creative I loved it! I also loved how every time lee askes neji to get his hair cut his response is always "I'm not going to have a hair cut" LOL! That cracked me up. |
| Story Weaver1 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseSo taht's the foundations of Team Gai, a haircut. All of Tenten's tales were pretty funny. |
| alliwant 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseomg..only u can make something like hair so symbolic in a story...clap clap clap. great job! |
| kriste-chan 2007-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseGanda! ^__^ gusto ko yung last part. >__ |