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roxas-kh
2008-07-19
ch 1,
abuseHehe.. cute idea with hair. I liked it!
Kane Shi Megami
2007-07-19
ch 1,
abuseWhy do I love this so much? *squee* One of the best team 8 fics out there :)

KSM
superb_oink
2007-06-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseoh. my. gawd. i had goosebumps all over my body when i read the concluding part. very well said. you're such a great author. *sniff*
junyortrakr
2007-06-05
ch 1,
abuseYea, that sounds about like Lee. It surely would be easy to pull one over on him like that. I am more than a little surprised that either Tenten or Neji would know about Samson, though, as Biblical knowledge is very uncommon in that part of the world.
The Reading Maid
2007-05-16
ch 1,
abuseThat was sweet. I think Neji would not look like Neji is he didn't have his incredibly amazing long hair. But the cut looks good on Lee. Good story!
VirtualxSimplicity
2007-02-09
ch 1,
abuseCute and very insightful to their team dynamics. :]
VxS
Ohohen
2007-01-28
ch 1,
abuseHair. It must be cherished!

That was really good. xP
KasumiDestruction
2007-01-28
ch 1,
abuseI haven't read anything from you in such a long time. Heck, I haven't read anything from Naruto for such a long time. Or Cardcaptor Sakura. And I still don't know anything about Shaman King. Eheheh. Wonder if you still remember me...

Anyway. I must say your writing style's improved over the years. A lot more fluent and layered. I'm not a NejiTen fan since I don't know enough about Tenten to really like her but this story, I like. Believable right down to Neji's constant refusals, his final compromise, Lee's...yeah and Tenten's relative normalness. Her penchant for slipping into story-telling mode is a nice dimension :) Kudos to you. ^_^

Good luck with your future fics! Now that I've finished my exams, I'll be STALKING! >:3

~Kasumi-chan
Sheo Darren
2007-01-27
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful! A delightful blend of the funny, serious, shallow, deep, dramatic and romantic. And all revolving around such a simple thing as a haircut. You truly are a genius at evoking and distilling every ounce off fluffy goodness from such mundane items. I bow to you.

I loved the references to the Headless Horseman and Samsung, and how Tenten became Neji's sparring partner, and the play on the 'finality' and 'permanence'. Sweet!

A wonderful story! Moremoremorepleasepleaseplease!
Explosive Linh-Linh
2007-01-26
ch 1,
abuseThis was a wonderful fic to read! Continue writing, syaoran no hime!
ms. phishy
2007-01-25
ch 1,
abuseThat was great! Everyone's personalities were dead-on--especially Neji. Yeah, I think he really does like Lee--underneath all that bastardliness. ^_^ I've always thought that Team Gai had the best teamwork!
Loverly-Loving Fool
2007-01-19
ch 1,
abuseThat was really creative I loved it! I also loved how every time lee askes neji to get his hair cut his response is always "I'm not going to have a hair cut" LOL! That cracked me up.
Story Weaver1
2007-01-15
ch 1,
abuseSo taht's the foundations of Team Gai, a haircut. All of Tenten's tales were pretty funny.
alliwant
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuseomg..only u can make something like hair so symbolic in a story...clap clap clap. great job!
kriste-chan
2007-01-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseGanda! ^__^ gusto ko yung last part. >__
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