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M3lanch0ly
2009-06-08 . chapter 3
I would seriously love you if you continued this fic, I would. :D Or maybe you can have someone else to complete it?
Aliki
2008-03-12 . chapter 3
Wow.

Yukimura is on something scary-strong in this chapter.

I want some.

Other than that, genius. Pure, crack-tastic genius.

Please update soon!

-Aliki
serenitatis417
2007-09-24 . chapter 2
Hahaha, I'm sure this is going to turn out as good as TCON!

Update soon! Anticipating the new chapter whilst bouncing around... xPP

Heehee. Tango Pair drama later on? Yes, yes?
pearlshadow03
2007-05-01 . chapter 1
god one
ellab86
2007-02-06 . chapter 1
Oh goodness...that was TOO perfect. Jirou with one sock, a shy Choutaro, Atobe and Yuushi in their boxers *_* and our dearest Sanada and hit hat. *applauds before running off to read the next chapter*
IllusionedPhoenix
2007-01-26 . chapter 3
LOL! OMG This goes into the favourites! It's seriously crack but it's still funny!
LiQuYu
2007-01-26 . chapter 3
XD... Short Skirts. o_O I already had a hard time trying to imagine them in short shorts but skirts... XD... I wonder what would happen if Yukimura had a bigger winter house than Atobe's? XD... Atobe's ego would probably be bruised. ^^;; Anyways, hilarious chapter as always!! Can't wait for the chaos to start~~`*
mistressKC - wanteddeadoralive
2007-01-25 . chapter 3
mep! This crap makes me absolutely happy! I can't choose which scene or line is my favorite. I'm torn between this line: "He actually could talk without been prodded, asked a question or have that little white string in the middle of his back pulled.", the Rikkai cheerleaders, and this: "Couples yelled over one another and Yagyuu calmly picked Niou up and threw him across the room, presumably in revenge for being used as a stick. Or maybe he just wanted to vent his frustration. But mostly likely, it was because he wanted to show everyone that he could."

I also loved the happy cup and the pretty green and red crayons and the horrors of an angry Jackal on a Gakuto ^_^

lol... you rock!
xquisittexabie
2007-01-25 . chapter 3
This is getting really good sho far. I lurve these two parts like hell.

Disapproving looks were directed to Akaya and Marui, “Akaya! Bunta! How many times have I told you? Those /aren’t/ edible!”

Both boys looked up guiltily. The remains of their colored crayons were smeared around their mouths and shirts.

“But… Buchou!” Marui wailed, “It said that it was apple flavored!”

Akaya nodded, “Mine said that it was strawberry flavored!”

Yukimura then sent Niou a warning glance. Niou shook his head and looked genuinely bewildered. He hadn’t changed any crayon labels lately and definitely none to apple and strawberry. Yukimura and Niou’s gaze went straight to Yagyuu who looked back at them innocently and pushed his glassed up the bridge of his nose more firmly. “What?”

XP that was hilarious!

An uproar ensured in the spacious living room. Couples yelled over one another and Yagyuu calmly picked Niou up and threw him across the room, presumably in revenge for being used as a stick. Or maybe he just wanted to vent his frustration. But mostly likely, it was because he wanted to show everyone that he could.

I lurved tht one even more XP anyways i hope yu update soon =D
SilverCyanide
2007-01-25 . chapter 3
OMG! *dies* I was going to print this out and read it at school today but I was going to miss the bus if I did so I didn't get to read it until I got back from school :(. But...OMFG! XD Crayons. Eating them. When I was 7 I ate some of a crayon because I had never done it before and I wanted to know what they tasted like. XD Botany. "And cows can fly" "They can!" Akaya suddenly struggled up and tipped Marui over, "I /saw/ them last night!" XD *dies* Awesome. :( Nuuo! Make them more than one chapter! Crack is good. :)
jooce
2007-01-25 . chapter 3
I love this story as much as your other training camp one XD Crack is good, very good.

You really get under every characters' skins...lol I wonder how the Monkey King and the Brick Wall will get together...

And Oshitari and Niou seems like they're thinking of some evil plan. XD keep updating!
skyblue147
2007-01-25 . chapter 3
XD *sniggers* Good to know Yagyuu is taking his pills responsibly. Good boy. XD And the sofa sandwich. And the crayons. XD Gawd, the crayons. And poor Hiyoshi, for being a 'random person'.

...I think the most insane one is Yukimura. Definitely. Insane, or even more evil than Niou.
Ahotep
2007-01-25 . chapter 3
Oh Atobe you shouldn't be so obsessed by the size of your house... It's not good for your health and purple won't suit you anymore.

The little welcome ceremony made me nearly fall from my chair. Yukimura's mind is really twisted. It must be compulsory to become buchou.

I hope the next chapter will be as funny as this one...
OnlyMeg
2007-01-25 . chapter 3
I'm trying and failing to think of something to say that won't make me sound like a broken record or sound cheesy, but yeah it was really good. And I enjoyed the bit about bunnies it kinda reminded me of the Buffy musical epsiode when one of the characters starts singing about how bunnies are evil.

Good job!!
Alizel
2007-01-25 . chapter 3
Yay! You updated! And gave me weird images of Rikkaidai in skirts! ...Yay!

I'm not surprised that the guys were in skirts (they'd probably do whatever Yukimura says), BUT, only Sanada and Akaya were embarrassed?! OMG! The others wear skirts for a living! AH! -runs around in a circle-

Anyway, I hope you update soon!
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