Yatta Yatta.This is good!

Ironically enough, Itatchi is good. I would tell more but I would just ruining the whole plot for you. Here's a hint, you're kind of right on the whole Uchiha clan being evil, but it didn't have much to do with Sauske.

Please, PLEASE dun let this end up Sasuaku ... it would SUCK.

good luck on the novel thing, and it was a very good chapter. im looking forward to the next one when u get the time again to write it up :)

Hey! i love your story! I just wanted to wish you luck on the NaNoWiMO! I saw that, so now I'm gonna do that too! But anyway, great story. Update when you get the chance after! :)

It's a good story so far. So far my only serious problem is the randomly inserted (AN: He's doing that a lot; etc, etc). That's one of the things that usually drives me away from reading a story. If you have something to say about the story, find a way to insert it into the story without it being your own comment, or else put it at the end.

For example, you could say...

Watching his companions sleep, he smiled again. He was doing that a lot lately, smiling, now that he didn't feel bent on revenge and hate. That happy child within him - the one he thought had died with his clan - was once more starting to reveal himself.

You could go ahead and use that paragraph too, since it really is just your words. All I did was reword it.

Anyway, just a little friendly advice to look at.
Keep writing,
TK

I'm glad that you updated this story. So it's gonna be Sasuke and Sakura, ne?

This is such a good story! I think that you should definately continue updating it. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon and keep up the good work!

Please update soon, sweetheart!

YES! You should bother with continuing this story!! It's really good! I love the idea of Sasuke and Itachi being good guys and even having a brother relationship again! Please update soon!

You should continue, it's a great story! I hope you do continue... :P

Really good fanfic! Hurry up with the third chapter!

That was pretty cool! I don't like Sakura though. Curse her! Lol. But I thought that was nice. You should make a Inuyasha/Naruto crossover and have Kagome paired with Itachi. Wel, byes! =)

That was pretty good. You should continue...please ^ ^. Just be a little more detailed, but I still enjoyed it. Aw Sasuke is so cute♥. I think it's cute how he smiles a lot, cuz i'm sure deep down inside he does. I'll wait for the next chapter!

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