Poor Cloud. I hope you find the peace you want soon. Can't wait for the next update! ^_^

P.S.- If you want to get a more dramatic effect listen to My Heart Will Go On while reading it. It fits...sorta

Not bad. Though I would like to know why Vincent is breathing...(I don't think he's dead)

Update?

Interesting little ficlet you have here... it's a pity there aren't many reviews. I look forward to future updates!

Love the story so far. Please keep up the great work! I can't wait for the update!

*does the Avalon crotch thrust* Oh, yeah! You totally rock. And it will rock even more when I get a chapter in. And you used the quote! w00t-age

I really liked the part where Cloud lays on the bed with Vincent's cape. So sad. So Last Order-esque, I got all misty-eyed, lol. Not even kidding.

Love you long time--happy ending!
DR