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| AvatarKatara38 2008-04-21 ch 4,  | abuseGreat story! |
| pickles4ever 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abusei really like this! please update soon! |
| Deanaholic1 2007-09-29 ch 4, | abusehey tht was a great story...i'm going 2 read more..luv it |
| jane 2007-06-22 ch 4, anon. | abuseplz write more. |
| dreamer 3097 2007-06-20 ch 4, | abusethis is good |
| Girlz-Rule 2007-06-20 ch 4, | abusegreat ending!:) |
| dreamer 3097 2007-02-18 ch 3, | abusethis is great |
| xodamhsoirxo 2007-02-17 ch 3, | abuseIt's sort of like a weird cross thing, Pony being helpless and wanting to be brave, Darry being brave and feeling helpless. wonderfully written, it's not over is it? update soon. |
| Girlz-Rule 2007-02-17 ch 3, | abusegreat story. update soon. :) |
| Honeydukes013 2007-02-05 ch 2, | abusePoor Poor Pony! Save him quick! And somebody should beat up paul... |
| xodamhsoirxo 2007-02-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseArg, Stupid Paul. People are silly sometimes, they think things will make other things change when really that can't and it's something that wouldn't be for the better...erm...yeah. I love this story, so original, update soon! |
| linda5576 2007-02-04 ch 2, | abusegood chapter i love how soda beat the crap out of paul he deserved it for how he told pony darry don't want him i almost cry when darry read pony notebook please don't let pony get hurt have darry and jayden get to him first then when pony is ok have darry kill paul for putting his family in danger you never mess with darry family and hurt his brothers on purpose and leave them to died i hope paul will survive darry wrath update soon please |
| dreamer 3097 2007-02-03 ch 2, | abuseomg you have to let him be alright |
| dreamer 3097 2007-01-26 ch 1, | abusethis is good please let him be alright. |
| Honeydukes013 2007-01-12 ch 1, | abusePoor Pony! Update quickly! |