 enchavez 2009-11-02 . chapter 1awesome story keep updating |
 MitarashiiDango 2009-06-12 . chapter 4omg i fell in love with the plot so hard..
please update this!!
ITS SO FREAKIN GOOD! |
 blackraven1412BR 2009-04-11 . chapter 4looks interesting
update soon |
 amber 2009-04-02 . chapter 4 i really like this story and i hope u can finish it |
 Edtheoddfish 2008-11-09 . chapter 4Wow, such a cool idea. Please update sometime soon.
This is a really amazing story. |
 culacula 2008-10-12 . chapter 4man this is just plain awesome!i love it so much it's my current favorite gravi fic!uh wow I get tingles when yuki gets so seductive like that.interesting idea with the mage thing and it ties very closely with the story uh just...wow! |
 KawaiiAlthea 2008-04-23 . chapter 4i love this story please continue it please please please i wanna know what will happen to shuichi waah! hurry up and update i wanna know what happen to him! update fast! thank you! |
 Bacontheft 2007-12-30 . chapter 4Did the fool child know how far off the ground they were and that they had trusted their lives to an abnormality of fabric and thread?
gosh, i really couldnt get aladin out of my head while reading this (i even went as far as absentmindedly singing the opening song for it) this was very interesting, at first i thought you had it backwards casue shu normally has the bronze skin and yuki's the one with pale as snow skin or somthing XD |
 Lunasariel 2007-10-27 . chapter 4You're leaving it here?! Bad, bad authoress! This is a great idea, and I'd hate for it to go unfinished. Update, please? *adds to alert list* |
 vampire princess liracia 2007-10-03 . chapter 4great story cnt wait for more chapters to b added |
 Dragon of Blood 2007-04-06 . chapter 1This is really really good so far! I hope that you will continue it. Please Update Soon!! |
 Andra Sashner 2007-03-18 . chapter 1I thought I had reviewed this but I see now I hadn't! Sorry about that, I was a free-reader for a while there.
Okay, so:
Really like the Shu and Hiro characters, I can still somehow feel the personality of the original characters in there. Really liking that. Strange to read about the additional brothers, and both so opposite each other. Still, liking them as characters here. Eiri is still the emotionally disabled fool he can be, he made me laugh on a few occasions... and I am so curious to read more about how he is and where he is from!
The messenger brid ending there really irked me, it was just getting good! The tension was there and I was so excited and... no more chapters. Argh!
Naturally, I'm eagerly awaiting your next update. This is a really original AU, I've never read one like it before. Happy writing! |
 graceless dance 2007-03-04 . chapter 4Wow, this haas got to be one of the best AU Gravitation fic.s I've read...^_^ Ireally like it and I think I'll die if I don't read more *crying* I love it, it is just ...fun to read...with a little hotness mixed in LOVE the hott-ness-es ^_^ |
 LoveHiei-Rine 2007-02-02 . chapter 4Oh!! A music mage...didn't see that coming! Your good!^^ update soon |
 Creasias 2007-01-31 . chapter 4I really love it! There are some typos here and there, but still ok. Hm... would Shu-chan escape with Yuki to the outside world? Please explain why (if possible, without using a whole chapter to tell it)Yuki hates mages and more details about Yuki's family's living conditions. You can do better! Yay! Please update soon! |