I really liked this, I think that it captured Luna very well. Great job!

ive never thought of luna like that, but ur totaly right
i love the romeo juliet reffrence
so cute

I love your writing style. It's absolutely gorgeous.

Whoa, cool. Nice bit of Femmeslash. I don't like Femmeslash much, but you did a good job.

That was the single most amazing thing I have read in my entire history of reading fanfiction. Wow. Though I'm not a big Luna/Ginny fan myself (where's the evidence?), you've certainly got me hooked.

Continue writing about Luna: it seems to be one of your fortes (even though I've only read one of your stories). And now that I think about it, Luna's being the sun really does complement Ginny's red hair...

Niceness times infinity!

That. Was. AMAZING. Seriously, that was probably the coolest fanfic on this site. It's so poetic, and the rhythm of the paragraphs is amazing and effective. That first line definitely sets it so we know that you know who you're talking about, because the rest of it is looking at Luna in a whole new, descriptive, beautiful light, through a whole new set of eyes.

I LOVE this story.

That last line was amazing. I don't even know. That line is just like --BOOM-- amazing.

*Fangirls*

? THAT WAS STUPID! but was somewhat entertianing

How beautiful. The Shakespear quothe framed the story in a nice way, and the descripton of Luna was simply wonderful.

For some reason the world "again" in the first paragraph made it all even more suggestive.

Well done!