 Shayerahol22 2009-09-12 . chapter 57I'm totally in love with 57. <3 Your drabbles are so much fun to read~ |
 Cole Alvina 2008-09-13 . chapter 59"Yes Madame."
T_T Boq, you poor idiot.
This had got to be one of my favorites so far. I don't know why, I think because of the last sentence XP |
 TillITryIllNeverKnow 2008-04-23 . chapter 1What a unique and touching angle on the story! I'm so the Elphaba girl, but I know a gem when I read it! |
 Dyani 2008-04-22 . chapter 89Oh, Glinda-angst! May I never tire of you, Glinda-angst. Never ever. :O I think you did get the point across with this, even with having to pare it down.
(See, I was under the impression that purposefully achieving 100,0 words was, in fact, AN AWESOME THING. If it were me, I'd have done the same thing AND taken a screenshot of the wordcount AND drawn happy faces all over the screenshot in Photoshop AND shown it to all my friends. So.)
(a-also, uh, I'd maybe like to request a drabble that is happy and Boq-related, perhaps? x3; ) |
 Dyani 2008-04-22 . chapter 88:D I am excited that you are still intending to finish this! I, uh, might never have said this before or anything, but your drabbles are pretty much the best.
And this one comes across as painfully true. If Elphaba ever were driven so far as to try praying, she'd think of it exactly like this. And the way you build a sort of suspense quietly in only a few words and then turn it around at the last sentence is quite skillful. It is! :o |
 TryDefyingGravity 2008-04-22 . chapter 89Nyargh, that made me sad D:
You have mucho talent for making a point and then driving it home and making me go "AGH THATS SO TRUE AND SAD AND NYARGH"
/incoherent/
THAT WAS PRETTY TOO. :D |
 TryDefyingGravity 2008-04-22 . chapter 88*squishes*
I've given up on attempting concrit, it generally comes out incoherent anyway, so I'm stuck with "Loved it" XD
It was very pretty |
 TryDefyingGravity 2008-03-26 . chapter 62*reading through these wonderful things*
May I say that this seriously reminds me of "Lovely Ladies/Fantine's Arrest" from Les Mis.
I love this one. |
 ElphabaTheDelirious117 2008-02-24 . chapter 11*squee* I love it, I love it, I love it! It's just adorable, like the beginning of a crush. It's also always nice to see how the whole City of Emeralds thing happened, because it was never even hinted at before. |
 ElphabaTheDelirious117 2008-02-24 . chapter 8She gave a hesitant attempt at a smile, saying, “Why did you come?”
He blinked, feeling that answering would be pointless: wasn’t the answer obvious? “You,” he said simply.
- Oh. If only there were Fiyeros around in Earth-land. He's so sweet. |
 ElphabaTheDelirious117 2008-02-24 . chapter 7Ok, I was torn between excitement and sadness when I read this. Sad because, well, Glinda died alone. The poor thing. Excited because I was thinking about how maybe, when Glinda sings, "The wicked die alone", she might be singing about herself and all the wicked things she's done. The only thing that had been missing was the dying alone part. But here you are.
I love your writing, it's so addictive. Good job on this one, no matter how cynically angsty. Which I still love. It's almost as addictive and awesome as coffee. |
 ElphabaTheDelirious117 2008-02-24 . chapter 4This was good, very eloquent. I like the way you tied in the first line to the last, and not predictably, either, which is always a relief. Good job. |
 TryDefyingGravity 2008-02-22 . chapter 87MEL |
 000101 2008-01-28 . chapter 86Ok, I've FINALLY caught up! If I had the time, I'd give you a review for every one, but as my library is closing right know, I'll just have to leave it at 'Cushion the Blow' is my favorite so far.
Last random question answer: I'm a sucker for Star Wars fan fic. Sad, I know. |
 TheatreBrat 2008-01-28 . chapter 10Oh, I feel so sorry for little Elphie... these are really good, I can't believe I only just found them |