is that BEAUTIFUL boy dead?oh by the way good story,please continue!

"And yet, he was the only one damned enough to be playing a game of hide-and-seek with the devil himself." I adore this line C: That's deep stuff there.

"Unwisely chancing a glance back at his pursuer, the portly man very nearly tripped over his own meet in gruesome astonishment." Not "meet" but "feet"?

"...falling face first into a puddle of chilled blood." Just GORGEOUS. Utterly beautiful line. The most gruesome thing I've read in a while, or possible ever. The image is just haunting. Chilled blood. >.< -shivers-

The beginning was arranged beautifully.

SUSPENSEFUL D: Update, would you? C: Please? I love these stories.

you have to do another chappie! Please! you write just great! I really want to find out what happens...:3 pretty please?

Wow... That was very amazing. Great writing skills! Please update soon, the year's almost over ;) Plus, I wonder how Tohru is going to keep from getting killed by -gulps- Yuki, the killer, Sohma. I also wonder if he kidnaps her... Well, great story, update soon, and I'll see you in the next chapter! =^.^=

omg this is awsome i can't wait until the next chapter. wow i love it. idk it's just something about assassins and death that makes my intrest turn. *evil smile* well update soon!

Wow this is a great story! Please please please update soon, i can't wait to find out what happens.

I love, love, love this story!! Please update soon!

Aww, poor Yuki, I wanna know what happens. PS I love Yukiru, so thank you for helping me to live in denial (urgh . . . it's just not gonna be a canon pairing . . . . ;_;) This going on my favourites!

O, now this promises excellence! I'm very enraptured by what you've written. Please update soon!

Yay! This is the only Yukiru I've ever liked. That is high praise coming from me.

Please carry on. And don't put off your updates for like...years. Please.

There was nothing wrong with it. So...no constructive criticism.

nice! I want more!

O_O YUKI'S A MURDERER? I've read stories like this before... but Yuki's so cold-hearted... wonder if it has anything to do with the eyes... And wonder how she's going to be saved now! Wow... I just can't get over how great your writing is! Please update soon! This is too much of a cliffhanger! XD I can't wait to see what other awesome chapters you write in both of your stories - you should definitely try to publish something! Keep it up!

Oh...sounds interesting...please update soon!!
BTW. Happy Late-14th B-DAY!

did you realise there is a story with the same plot or theme or w/e. it's where kyo is a killer and then he sees tohru and falls in love w/ her but then shes suppose to be his next vicim...i think this is like that.

I love this! It's original too. Keep it up. And damn it's fricking sweet to be the first reviewer! YEAH! Now where is the dessert? Gimme! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!

This story is great! I can't wait for the next chapter! When is it coming out?