I loved the reference to Marissa at the end. This was so good, nice job!

That was really good. "There at the end of the driveway was where his life in Newport had begun, and now it was where it would end." That was a great line! I absolutely loved this story. KUDOS for you!

You should really continue! :D i'll make sure i'll comment on each of your chapters!

LOVE; VVN