Nice POV. I like how you set the Pidgey's feelings towards battle.

great. sorry if that's a shoet review but i've used up most of my compliments on your other fic.

I. loved. it. I have often thought of what it must feel like.

An interesting and extremely original use of stream of consciousness merged with dialogue. The last bit of prose "the boy smiled down at the pokeball" I don't think should be there, however...

The stream begins very well, but the last three lines ("I fight in return for food and safety", "And stay trapped in a tiny cage", and "This is the price I pay") don't quite flow like what comes before it. Otherwise it is an engaging read that I can just breeze through. Pretty good!

Wow! I loved the suspense, the guessing at who's Pokemon's POV it was in. Very nice!

Yes, and very effective. Interesting format that conveys your meaning well. You might have a bit more punctuation though - no full stops or commas are effective only up to a point. Discard that last sentence if you consider that your writing skills are far better than mine - which is my opinion, anyway.

Crimson: I REALLY hope Dove doesn't think that towards me. I never really put her through that kind of battle as a Pidgey...I just gave her TLC until she evolved for me. She loves me, and I love her back. Does that make me bad?

True, true... The Pokemon WILL revolt soon...

I liked it. I love stories that are from the Pokemon's point of view, and a lot of yours are. Your poetry is really facinating.

meh.. not that dark.. just kinda.. shady. I love angst fics tho... makes me wanna write another pokemon one : ) lotsa love, Jeanette

Even though it was short, it was very, very good. You should write more angsty stuff. ! Nice job.

Very good... The price for WHAT, though? Doesn't seem like that pidgey got a whole lot out of being trained...

Very strange story, but sounds ever so true, Good work!

that was good though not as good as some of ur others

I feel sorry for it. If I had a Pokemon, I wouldn't keep it in a ball against it's will.