 BookBitch 2007-10-07 . chapter 3 Hey, me and my friend are up at like 3:00 (3:01 really) and were kinda acting like where high or something. Just wanted to say nuce job with the chacters...my friends keeps telling me what to writew, so she's gonna type something now...
Friend: Hey Kootoes on this script, you really got the charector's basic personality down and I really would believe if you bwere the creator of ,"The Office". Great job! =)
She appears to think typing it script style is cute...its not. And I think "kootoes" is spelled wrong...its like cudoes or something...whatever
Nighty Night |
 Twilight Rose2 2007-08-25 . chapter 8THAT WAS AWESOME! Funny and a storyline? Well la di da and the cool thing was is that I can see it happening.
Kudos to you! |
 MorganisM-Lve 2007-08-19 . chapter 8that was really good |
 moosier 2007-08-17 . chapter 8 omG hilarious. you captured each character!! lol so funny, write another story soon! |
 young for eternity 2007-07-27 . chapter 7Hahaha. I love it! "I'd only pay 7.50 for Dwight." "My name is Isaac, not Bob." Too too too funny! I bow down to you. |
 emunotemo 2007-07-09 . chapter 6 Good job on this story! I really like it, it's funny and original... Keep going! |
 weareborgg 2007-06-28 . chapter 5Haha, I love this story. I waited forever for an update. And then one day, violá, an alert! I was so excited. I really like how you've incorporated the talking heads. I think you've captured all of the characters perfectly! I was a little confused about the dream at first, but then I got it. Hmm ... oh what is going to happen next? And what, oh what is Jim planning? |
 mg 2007-06-26 . chapter 5 I really like this idea, plus you have Dwight down to a T. And Stanley, too. This is definitely the sort of thing that would be an episode in Season II. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
 MirrorKate 2007-06-18 . chapter 4Hee. Kevin. Glad to see an update on this! |
 CSIMel 2007-06-13 . chapter 3Cyber smiley Bill...Awesome.
Anyhoo, just stumbled across this, pretty good job.
Love how you're writing the characters.
The glove/DNA thing had me laughing out loud.
Look foward to where you take this. XD |
 Pink the Color 2007-01-19 . chapter 2This is funny! I like it. Love Dwangela |
 Bookybookbook 2007-01-10 . chapter 1oh dear. sounds like Dwight.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Its nice to read something other than JAM i've got to say. |