That touched my soul a bit :) Somehow I have a craving for a glass of rum now... cheers

Beautiful! I think it potrays Elizabeth and Jack's emotions very nicely.

Do more! This is so... sweet? true? what I think Liz would be going through? *can't think of the right word*

I like it.

I love it.

Very clever! I hope you will add to it. I loved this line: "fortunately, Jack Sparrow is a pirate, and stealing treasure is what pirates do best."

I really loved the one-liners. They were all very well done and very touching.
'If she had a choice, Elizabeth thinks she would like to be reincarnated as a seabird—free to fly wherever her heart desired, never forced to choose between the land and the sea.' was especially my favourite. Really, lovely work.

this is really great!!
i think you should continue it!