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| Trin24 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abuseThat touched my soul a bit :) Somehow I have a craving for a glass of rum now... cheers |
| JeanieBeanie33 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! I think it potrays Elizabeth and Jack's emotions very nicely. |
| Skoteinos Metamfiezomai 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abuseDo more! This is so... sweet? true? what I think Liz would be going through? *can't think of the right word* I like it. |
| Ditte3 2007-01-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it. |
| Gravitea 2007-01-10 ch 1, | abuseVery clever! I hope you will add to it. I loved this line: "fortunately, Jack Sparrow is a pirate, and stealing treasure is what pirates do best." |
| Gea 2007-01-10 ch 1, | abuseI really loved the one-liners. They were all very well done and very touching. 'If she had a choice, Elizabeth thinks she would like to be reincarnated as a seabird—free to fly wherever her heart desired, never forced to choose between the land and the sea.' was especially my favourite. Really, lovely work. |
| Beautiful x lie 2007-01-10 ch 1, | abusethis is really great!! i think you should continue it! |