not the best but for somthing that is so far like a one-shot its good

i was wondering what the whole croissant was about. LoL. Paris is a great suprise!

i like the surprise
keep up the good writing!

this was really cute and showed a better relationship between them. i like it.

Hurry up and keep writing the suspense is killing me

wow super awesome story..i like it alot i want to keep reading more it's really interesting...that is some cliffy...i can't wait to keep reading more hope you update soon..keep up the amazing writing.

I LOVE this story! Please update soon ! =]

Oh please update this story!
Im proud to say that I am Just a little, ok very obsessive, and I will go absoulutely NUTS if I dont get to see the ending to this surprise!
~EdwardsLove1901

i love it. i love it. i love it. can't wait for more

Sweet ! :) update soon please

This is cute,

hehehe, that was really cute . . .keep adding! I cant wait to find out what happens next!

This story is AWESOME!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

As always, you write a well put together story. Give yourself a pat on the back! And, major swooning properties as well. Great job!

a... croissant?
ahahaha!
loved it!
yay for fluff.