Awww.. I cried at the part when Misty explained she saw him frightened when the attack was over, and that it scared her even more to see him like that.. Beautiful story! Love the sadness. There aren't many well written sad stories out there, people attempt to write them, usually doesn't thrn out he way they originally wanted it.. I'm not saying I can do one, I swear, I'd suck eggs if I tried to write an awesome story like this, that includes drama, comedy, romance, sadness, mushiness, AND a happy ending! This is like a legendary story! :D

storie evah :)

i love it also I just love Togepi " Mommy and Daddy can stay together!"

I really enjoyed this story and love how you included the Pokemons' thoughts/actions. Especially Psyduck and Squirtle - they were hilarious! The Ash/Misty moments were really sweet. I loved it! So well done :)

Very good. I love it

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This was really sweet! It would be awesome to see another version where they aren't rescued so fast too...

Anyway, I loved how the pokemon interacted, and also the fact that Ash and Misty gradually realized their feelings for each other.

I really enjoyed reading this!

That... Was... The...::...BEST aam story I've ever read ever! :]

that was a realy good story im glade i took the time to read itx

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that was pretty good, it was well written, ash/misty all the way!

I have to say, this really is one of the best romance fics I have ever read. I enjoyed it all the way. hope you write more like it :)

Wind-Deity

this is adorable and fluffy and i love it!

one of my favorite aaml's

great job, and i love how you captured the personalities of the pokemon too!

wow i love how Ash and misty all ways end up together i just wish that they would tell each other in the t.v show. good story

Pure magic... a true achievement! 10/10 stars! Great job!