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| UpperClassK9 2008-07-04 ch 26, | abuseIt's okay, take ya time. I've got loads anyway. (Not really, once you count all the things i have to do but are ignoring.) It wasn't really cliched, but more of like a little fast-paced? |
| JacinthX 2008-07-03 ch 26, | abuseNice job on Tsuki as an 11 year old. Paperwork at such a young age lol. Looking forward to your ending, keep on writing :) Can you draw the part in chp 13 where Tsuki's wings are torn? Thanks for your good work! |
| JacinthX 2008-05-02 ch 25, | abuseYAY! Tsuki! thankies, Good job :) sorry for the late review :/ Hope you continue updating. Nice title! |
| UpperClassK9 2008-04-28 ch 25, | abuseUpperClass... MEN? I sure do hope it's not my name you're mis-typing... |
| iwandamonian 2008-04-27 ch 25, | abuseIt's interesting in a good way; is Tsuki supposed to be that weird? |
| UpperClassK9 2008-04-13 ch 24, | abuseI'm reading. If i'm not good enough, well then, i'll not review. >sulks< But yeah, not much comedy here. But i guess you're into the second season already? With that guy, em, Hazel? (I watched RELOAD dubbed in Manderin, so they had different names for that guy and his henchman. Whose names i promptly forgot right after. I learnt the name Hazel through fanfics.) |
| hellscream89 2008-04-12 ch 24, | abuseYour are not losing your touch!! It is still funny as hell! Please post the next chapter up soon. |
| JacinthX 2008-04-11 ch 24, | abuseGood job on this chapter, thanks for the fast update. Yeah, hopefully the next chapter will be more humorous?(secretly hopes for more on tsuki) |
| UpperClassK9 2008-04-10 ch 23, | abuseNah, Goku's fun enough for the chapter. It's so funny! The way he's so nervous and stuttering! XD |
| JacinthX 2008-04-10 ch 23, | abuse100th review! i think. I'd like tsuki to end up with Sanzo please? More on Tsuki please :P |
| the stephs who have no life... 2008-04-02 ch 22, anon. | abuseGo the chickens! can we have knife weilding penguins next? (serious)... MAYBE EVEN A TALKING MONGOOSE WITH A BAD CASE OF ALZHEIMERS? Awesomeness... |
| UpperClassK9 2008-03-13 ch 22, | abuseWell, pretty much pointless, but still fun. XD |
| AuraBlackWolf 2008-01-16 ch 21, | abuseOk I can tell that this story is leaning on the Goku/Sanzo side, and while that ok and all...its so freging over done! Kougaiji/Sanzo would make a wonderful pairing for this fic^-^ I mean while some might say Goku was destined for Sanzo..Bull. Goku is to inmature for Sanzo he's like a son or younger brother really. Kougaiji would be perfect for Sanzo and its just so damn hot too. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make this a Kougaiji/Sanzo fic^_^ thaks for lisening |
| UpperClassK9 2007-12-19 ch 21, | abuseMan... Do all ancient-Japanese names have to be so LONG? But thanks for the info! ^-^ Background knowledge is good. But just don't go overboard and write a pageful of it, then that's too tiring to read. >shudders from remembered experiences< So Susanowa has the power to erase memories? Seems useful. And he's right, nothing would be able to stop Sanzo-on-a-rampage, not even a god. (But remember that episode in the anime? Goku could. >hint, hint, bacholar polls< ) You made a few mistakes this chapter, you know. Do you have a beta? (I'm not scolding, just saying.) |
| UpperClassK9 2007-12-18 ch 20, | abuseOh. Where did you get that? >curious< And thank you for the update! Thank you very much! You do have it harrd, don't you? >sudden realisation< The chapters and story itself is long. |