 Culinaromancer 2008-06-07 . chapter 1That was so good! It had emotion, sadness, and so much more in it! Loved it! |
 MilesTailsPrower-007 2007-11-09 . chapter 1Guh. Poor Ion.
Honestly a pity what happens to him; what I found most tragic is how you don't really realize how well he was comprehending the situation until it's too late. Anyway, beautiful perspective all around. I really liked Natalia's, and the difference between "afraid" and "frightened". That was very well thought through. Your psycho-analysis of each character was perfect, honestly, even Tear's.
Well done! |
 Omniflyer 2007-01-14 . chapter 1No, no. Thank *you* for *writing.* Your drabble work puts mine to shame (now, how much of a compliment that is, Vil, you can decide for yourself. :P). Great insight into some heads that don't usually lend themselves to viewing (*cough*Jade*cough*).
And will we be seeing other stuff from the Vil-chan soon? >_> |
 Charlett 2007-01-12 . chapter 1Wow~! You showed off everyone's personalities well here. Everyone's thoughts and fears... even Ion's... That's so wonderful...
Everyone is afraid when tribulation begins, but the truly great rise to the challenge. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Much Love:
Christy |
 Nirvana Fox 2007-01-11 . chapter 1Welcome back!
And you come back with another fiction, too, ^^. Nice job with the seven of them. I twas really nice to see their monologues at this point of the storyline. Really poetic too, ^^. |
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