This is amazing. The way you use the words...it's very unique.

I'm fairly new on the site and I am not one hundred percent sure what Mary-Sue, AU etc..actually means. If you could tell me or give me some pointers about the site that would be fantastic.

ever going to update these? Please do.

I read your story straight through. It was well written and easy to follow. It left me wishing that there were more chapters.

Very nice.

that was great! very deep! Great job!

These are...amazing...I...I just dont know how to remark on these. There just so...magnificent. I loved reading them. You did a great job. I cant wait to read more.

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yah, it's not easy when something like that happens. i never really thought how Cyborg felt when Jinx went with Kid Flash...pretty interesting idea.

oh...poor Raven. i know how she feels...sort of. i'm not a half demon, but people always do the same things to me.

this was very intriguing, and very well described. you keep Raven in character very well. you write in a slow, thoughtful way, and that takes talent

this is a really good chapter. it's a little confusing, but really deep and very well done.

Wow. So who do I start with? Cy or Raven?

First off I want to say that I like that you acknowledged the fact that they could be a couple, based on the fact that here both are passed over for someone else. You acknowledge but you don't go that far, which is nice. They have that lovely, close friend vibe that would be ruined (IMO) by a relationship.

I also like how you mention Terra and how maybe she is really that girl and is getting the last hurrah by dragging Beast Boy through all he's going through just because she can.

It's nice, seeing this side of Raven. The side that's a little more guarded and a even less open then normal. I love the idea of her and Cyborg just working in that companionable silence, where talking isn't necessary cause you just know what the other person is feeling.

This is good. From the spilling about what went down with Terra to the end where both just go back to the car, back to that safe middleground, where maybe just maybe it doesn't hurt so much and they don't feel so alone.

Excellent work. And like I said before I'd love to see you do more of theses pieces.

Wow...

That's so cool! ^_^

Interesting story. I don't exactly like it and I kinda wanted to quit reading it because it was steadily boring me. Maybe you can make a more adventuresome story?

Again, beautifully written.

Terra is a complicated character, and her relationship with Raven only makes it more so. I'm of two opinions with her. Firstly, I rather highly dislike her. But, at the same time, I think her and Raven are both beautifully complex characters that only a few people have the skill to include them in stories - especially together.

I think, given a well working author, that Raven and Terra could, perhaps, get past their differences, and as I believe with Raven and Jinx, become quite close friends. Raven and Terra are probably just so alike, that they clash... Complications with Beast Boy also make it interesting... I don't like TBB pairings, lol.


Anyway, beside the point -__-;

Well written. Interesting.

Very intense little one shot.Miss leading to those of us hooked on Raven's law-breaking love with (usually) various characters. I will admit freely that I believed it was Beast Boy about whom she was referring in the beginning.

"When I’m lonely- he knows. I don’t know how he knows, but he’s always there with something- an apology from when he made me snap, a comment that makes me think of smiling, or just his assurances that he loves me, and that it’s okay if I don’t feel the same way. I only need to be myself. It’s enough."

That is that is the only section I find out of line for Trigon, but no one has really looked into his character. I think your own story, Dance of the Skeletons, is the only one that I've seen (or bothered to read?) that really looked at Trigon as more than a "Slave daughter, rule world" type character.

Very well written (like all your work XD) and I enjoyed it.

FireDitto