aw that was sad :( but good
please contiue!

Woah!
That's a very very very good story!
I can't wait to read the next chapter! So please hurry up and post!

i love this story but it confuses the hell out of me at the same time lol.

wat does orochimaru (is it him?) want with hinata? hinatas mom cheated on him with hiashi or the other way round? lol
was the white heired man kabuto?

update soon!

I like it! Intreasting, gorey and Itachi. MY favorite things. Poor Hinata though.

that was a really good chappy
i wished it was a bit longer tho
lol

Oh my god this is the goriest story ever! I wanted to close my eyes for some of the parts (which would make it really hard to read, don'tcha think?). Really good story. Can't wait for the next update!

I love it. Everything was clear and suspenseful, but still, poor Hinata. I pity her in this story and I hope everything turn out fine with her and Itachi. Though I'm still trying to figure out who was that white mysterious person? Eh... I'm clueless, sorry -_-

Well anyways, thank god! You updated, I love this story. Hope to read more of your story soon.

OMG UR BACK! Thanx for not letting the story die cause its so awsome@@

yeay...you updated!!

hm...i wonder just how old are they in here coz hinata sounded very young and itachi sounded pretty...old...considering he already has a gun and stuff...but i wonder what is wrong with hiashi?? i mean, hinata is totally innocent in this matter and who did hinata's mother had affair with??

very mysterious...can't wait for you to update soon!!

Impressively vivid and very well-written. I just love the way you portray dark and angst. This definitely is still worth the wait.

P.S. Despite your hint of the white-haired-man-who-looked-young, I really could only think about Orochimaru/Kabuto ^^.

I for one am really glad you are back! love this chapter 'plot' and all! UPDATE SOON!

Glad your'e back, this story has always stuck in my mind so I didn't even have to go back to review. Good chapter, it will be interesting to see where this goes.

Hey will Hinata and Itachi love each other aging?

this is good...seriously good...i enjoyed reading the drama, the gore and the character intensity...

itachi was definitely in his element in here & i wonder, does he really have feelings for her?? how about sasuke??

hm...the mysterious 'guy' who i guess would be 'gaara' (i hope!!) sounded as brutal as well...

the intricacies of the characters are complex and that i like...very much coz it gives the story a certain kind 'life' to it which is very well described...i also like the style and use of 'yakuza' life style especially 'oyabun' and 'ane' which are very well presented...giving a archetypical japanese lifestyle...

i'd also like to see how it will become a itahina fic in the end coz its so plain obvious tat hinata just hates itachi, and who could've blame her??

so, i hope you'll update soon & fast!!

definitely in my faves!!

Didn't actually expect it to be this gory =x Really nice piece of work you've got here - I think you portrayed Itachi rather well ^^ Do update soon!