This was so good. It put a grin on my face immediatly. Those two are just too much fun together, and you suceeded in a short one-shot to show us why. Arigato!

I'm usually against HirumaxMamori, but this was good.
Heheheh, Hiruma you perv.

XD Nice.

I cackled madly. It's so cute- it works so well for both characters. Very well done. :D

One word I can say..

LOL

LOL...nice...really, I think he miscalculated...100% chance of getting hit with that broom...

Now THAT was just too funny XD

hope to read more from you :D

Priceless!

Leave it to Hiruma to give off a certain vibe (preoccupation, anxiety, what have you) when he actually has something completely else in mind!

And I love how you utilize Hiruma's Golden Rule: If there's any chance of success, no matter how minimal, go for it!

hahahahahhaahhahahahahahahahahahhah lol so like hiruma!

Hahaha... I loved the ending, and great use of their personalities. ^^

How have I not read/reviewed/giggled at this before?! It's just so awesome!

That was an excellent short story! Especially for those who had a rough day. Good job! Keep at it! =D

this one's funny
totally loved it.
now if you would just come back and do some more hirumamo fics...
all hail.

LMAO

This was effen hilarious!

I especially love the way it ended. XDD

HAHAHAHA!! Pervy Hiruma! That was fun!