i think this story has the potential of being realy good, i have read other storys you have done, so i have no dought it will be!!

Why is their no more chapters to read :(

Ok so you left of in 2007! were are you!! i want to know what happens!! and has the twilight awards been updated recently?? It doesn't look like it. just sayin

I love the story! update soon!

continue this story, please. if you have the time, that is. :)

This is really interesting! I hope to see more.

O.O *gasp* i must know what happens so UPDATE SOON!


~LExi~

Great story! Are you going to continue it any time soon? I would really like you to.

Looking forward to the rest, who could that girl be...i'm questioning all my previous beliefs here, keep it up it's good

hey i just realized that you havent updated in a year! whats up wit that? do u not think its a good story or something?? i'm confused cuz i love this idea!! please update!

Wow!!

That was amazing!! I love this idea!!
I'm confused at why Edward denied the fact that he was staring at that girl. Was he doing that purposely? Or did that girl have some kind of mesmorizing power or something? Haha idk.
Please update soon!! I'm hooked on this story!

Sounds really good so far! I love how you set the story up the same way Stephenie Meyer does with her series, with the preface and everything. Everything was very well thought out and well written - everyone seemed to be in character perfectly (well, except with Edward checking out other girls, but I'm sure we'll find out about this soon enough :)

Can't wait to read more!

So Hey its now 2008 and you still haven't updated. WOW, a story this good should not go un-updated for a year. So come on and update your story already, I want to know what happens.

ah, sweet story. awesome. cant wait to c wat happens. but i am warning u, if edward and bella break up, i will not read this story! sorry, i get a bit OTT wen hey arent together. - update soon xoxo

Please continue, it sounds interesting.