Okay, so I really can be more articulate than: HOT! So perfectly well done. I, like you, LOVE angry teen fight sex, and you did it so well. Loved it!

wow,that was incredibly HOT! ur an awesome writer!

HOT. SO HOT. <3

Yeah babe, you got it!! This was seriously hot and realistic and masculine and hot, and hot again. I've always thought slash was about gay sex. And you can try to make it prettier in much ways, but gay sex is what it is- men having sex (Wow, I'm so smart). I believe most people here write stuff that has nothing to do with the real concept, at least my concept, of slash, because it's way too feminine and sweet and romantic. So when I read this I was surprised of how awesome real it is.

Serious congratulations!

The fighting is hot, so hot!! For a second there I was starting to get anxious, like they really were going to kill each other. D: !! This is so raw and aggressive and utterly delicious, I loved it!!

amazing amazing amazing
flawless

Holy. Fracking. **, dude.
That was amazing!
I mean, I like angry sex, and I've read it on several occasions ;) but this was almost more violent than it was angry. And I love it!
Great work :)
And now I will read it again.
/Jokerina

Well, I hate to tell you what many have said before me, but I have to say...

YOU ARE AWESOME.

This is the best Style fanfic I have EVER read. I also share your love for violent/agressive teen SEX! Mostly because I know my way around it... *grins*

...Okay, that's a lie. But I have wreslted with guys in the past and when you have a dirty mind like mine, it's hard to keep your thoughts out of the gutter.

This made me want to go write some violent stories too... I am so HYPER all of a sudden! This fanfic was so sexy and very VERY hot.

KEEP UP THE EPIC WORK MY FRIEND!

~Hannah

why would anyone flame you, this was great! :D

GodDAMN that was hot. Ha ha, guess I'm as messed up as you are. XD
And poor Wendy. I'm half lol-ing at and half feeling bad for her. Oblivious little sucker. ;)

GOD that was effing hot!
I worship you man

That is one violent sex scene O_o.
XD poor Wendy. love it~

Holy ** **, I love you right now. And I don't even know you.
That kicked a lot of **. Seriously...

Wow.
Talk about violent.
That was hot and very well-written. Great job.

Hot, nad bitterly cynical. Lovely.