this is one of the best stories i ever read, it would be great if u continued but still u did a great job.

My last review since i already reviewed chapter five... Wow... i normally NEVER review for anyone since i'm too lazy, but reviewing for this fic was actually kinda fun!

This story seems to be moving in a smooth pace and i love how you show that Goku isn't as 'innocent' as many others perceive him to be at times. He's still a man after all. lol

I also love how you portrayed Bulma to be tough on the outside, but scared and bitter in the inside.

All in all, this was another great chapter! ^^

Can't wait until you update this!

I think my favorite part of this chapter is where Vegeta describes Trunks as 'His son. His legacy. His eternal torment'. That made me laugh because of how true it was, especially since Trunks loves to play pranks.

This fic is so realistic since it's understandable as to why Bulma was afraid of the younger-version of Vegeta, especially since things are so bad between them. And Chi-Chi's reaction is also understandable. She's fiery and quick tempered so of course she'd literally go crazy when something like this happens to her.

> _ < Goku is so sweet in the end. He's matured A LOT since his marriage to Chi-Chi and while he does hurts people sometimes emotionally without meaning to, he always does his best to somehow make up for it in the end.

On to Chapter 4!

I love how there's something going on in each chapter. A lot of people put in fill-ins or unnecessary crap, but yours is clean and straight to the point.

You portrayed Vegeta real well, showing his gruff nature yet his soft side towards his son. Then there's Goku relax, carefree nature. ^^

Once again, on to the next chapter!

gonna leave a review for each chapter because that's how awesome this story is!

I love how you portrayed Goten and Trunks here. They're still kids, even when they have the power to destroy the earth like a million times and still have enough power to spar. Then there's the subtle hints through the actions of Chi-Chi and Bulma that prove that they're having trouble with their husbands.

Love it all!

Wow, this story has a lot of potential to become great. i was wondering if you're ever going to update this again since this hasn't been touched since the start of 2007. it'll be a shame if this was gone to waste, but im sure you'd have ure reasons if you were to stop this.

if you can, please tell me if you're going to continue or not cause i think i've driven myself crazy enough wondering if you're ever going to update...

tsukiangel1231 @ yahoo. com

please please continue with this story! i know its been quite a while since u updated but its honestly one of the best i've read in a long time =D

love the idea of this story - seeing that you haven't deleted it, i can assume there's still the hope of you continuing it XD
and i also love the in-characterness. :)

what happened?
did u die?!
u had a brillant fic going on and u stopped.
please update!
goodlife93

Your Idea is so good!! please continue!! you shouldnt leave people hanging for too long!, so continue because i'm sure many people are waiting for it!

thanks

Please update soon! This is a great story! So, update!

Ja ne!
waterkunoichi

As much as I love GOku and Vegeta, I can't help but wish that they'd have some stiff competition with their wives just for once to wake them up from their one track minds obsessed with fighting. Poor ChiChi and Bulma.

Well written and you keep everyone in character! please continue!

Update soon? PLEAZ?!

thanx

please, please update I really like this story