I love this story. But it reminds a hunch of Mulan.

Unbelievable.
The first Ron/Hermione (proper/long) story I have read under Harry potter and it never
ceases to amazing me how brilliant the whole story line, and writing style is.
I love this story and I'm so upset it's over. I think you should write a sequel, unless you already haven't (I WILL be checking that.) just seen as though you never had Harry and Ginny getting together too.
I think you portrayed the twins heaps good too :B
Yes, you definitely need a sequel.
Great story.
Keep it up :B

Nevermind, I hit the wrong button and way reading the wrong chapter. Sorry about that.

This chapter is exactly like another earlier in the story. Did you open the wrong file?

Oh My God!
I totally cried when Sirius said "James,Lily?"
This story is so good though.I thought that it was going to be bad but its actually very good.=)

omygosh! i love this story! but what happens to harry and ginny?! theyre so cute they are!

please write a sequel or if u have send me the link xD

i LOVE this fanfiction and i REALLY can't wait for the sequel ;D

an interesting twist on Harry Potter. . . i like it

Your storys too godd
Youre making me stayy up too latee :(
Just wanted tolet you know that you're a freaking amazing writerr :D

This was such a sweet story! Lol. I haven't read such a nice story or at least a emotional one with good grammer and structure. o.O Loved this story! xD
-Mel's Merleawe

I didn't think I was going to like a AU story where the trio didn't originally know eachother but oh my it was so good! I love the ups and downs of Ron and Hermione's relationship. I never get enough of stories where they come together in the end! I really enjoyed Hermione as John. You did a very good job of keeping them all in character. I liked the idea of Hogwarts Knights - I liked Neville character though I think I wasn't paying enough attention because I don't really understand what was happening between Neville and Davis? Is Neville gay? Was Davis visiting his parents because he cares about Neville?

I can't wait to start your sequel! I hope you are a quick updater :)

Thanks again for sharing your work.

Very interesting.. I was a bit sceptical but I think this could be alot of fun!! I look forward to reading the rest of your story.

Thanks for sharing.

Hey,
That was a great story. i couldn't stop reading it! Though i was wondering, what happens with Harry and Ginny?

Great job,

Jay-Jay819

“And I suppose spending time with some Slytherin’s will do her some good will it?”

Ron appeared out of the shadows and walked towards them.

“Mind your attitude Weasley,” Snape spat Ron’s last name as though it were intended to be an insult.

“Like John would even want to spend time with – ”

Hermione stepped in front of Ron stopping him before he got them both into trouble.


Umm, I think there's a typo here. In the first sentence Ron says "her," but later he falls back to John. Does he know that "John" is really Hermione or was that a mistake?

Other than that, I really liked this chapter. Good work.

Great story thanks