Umm. That was interesting. It started off very well and had good potentional but it all sort of went downhill from there. I thought the RoseDoctor romance was pretty well written but very randomly put in, the ending was extremely rushed, the amnesia was very very unoriginal, I've seen it done a billion times.

But asides from that, well done -thumbs up-

-Ryntha

great story, of course I liked it! and don't worry, sometimes soppy can be exactly the right way to go... and this was one of those times. Brilliant story!

Soppy is good... Nice story, well done!

Jenni xx

Great chapter! But you need page breaks..

Jen x

Love the start, update it soon!

Jen xx