I can not believe you actually made me cry.

Ah well, beautifully written, and I adored Melanie. It was exactly right; Short (but then again not too short), sweet, dramatic...

Keep up the good work!

x Margot

That was really sweet! Snape and Dumbledore were perfectly IC, and it was quite romantic! _

Hn, what else to say..It was very cute, very well-written. Give yourself a pat on the back for a job well done! XD

*sob* you've bloody made me cry...

damn, this was a masterpiece, a marvelous idee embodied in an amazingly well-written dramatic story. even though the story is complete in itself, I would really love it if you could write a sequel where snape & melanie(who was a genius creation, just adored her!) finally remain together. [sorry, I guess I'm just crazy for happy endings!]